5. ... Vs. 60 ::..:$lobK::..:
 

Rules:

Battles go up Wednesday, Check Ins due on Friday before 11:59 PM EST, Verses due on Sunday before 11:59 PM EST.

10 Lines
No Biting
No Recycling
No Feeding

Only Voting Council May Vote On The Battle.


Good Luck

Checkin In Man..

check who the fuck is 60?hes not even on the list or is that part of this herbs name?

fixed cuz i had a typo in the first time posted

This herb listed ya interests as spitting......funny i thought hos swallowed
King of Rapverse?...you couldnt pull it off with as many shots as Diallo!!
Hate Bloods??.......but you pussy dont you bleed monthly or something?
You can write ya verse on ya bandanna and couldnt 'C' one of my punches!!
That out the way newb basher everyone of us know that you wack
Slobk a gang banger of course!!!...all C.owards R.un I.N P.acks!!
Eleavation not in your future like popped balloons and crashed airlines
Plus you came to this battle shook since my name surrounds you like 5 times;)


Cuz in this battle you like little boxes on windshields........a EZ PASS!! :laugh:


EXPLANATIONS
Kids a gay ass gang banger claims hes crip and look at his name for the 7th line personal :thumbup:

... took this with harder punches, better flow, and a better verse..:..:$lobK::..: all your lines are streched and it really took away from your verse...

Vote: ...

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This herb listed ya interests as spitting......funny i thought hos swallowed
King of Rapverse?...you couldnt pull it off with as many shots as Diallo!!
like RB said..first line was kinda played...decent though..6/10
This herb listed ya interests as spitting......funny i thought hos swallowed
King of Rapverse?...you couldnt pull it off with as many shots as Diallo!!
blah......4/10
That out the way newb basher everyone of us know that you wack
Slobk a gang banger of course!!!...all C.owards R.un I.N P.acks!!
dope...9/10
Eleavation not in your future like popped balloons and crashed airlines
Plus you came to this battle shook since my name surrounds you like 5 times
that was alrite.......7/10
........... shit even you said that you trash!

Cuz in this battle you like little boxes on windshields........a EZ PASS!!
good closer......7/10

OVERALL-27/50

slobl:

Your Career Is Diminished..Dis "Nerd Goin Downhill".."Like Honor Roll Students On Ramps"..
I'm Shook? Homie Went Into "Witness Protection" Almost As Much Times As His Rank.. *
poor opener....2/10
When He Lose..He Creates An Alias After..Homeboi Neva "Blessed" Like "Atheist Chapters"..
Think Ya Personality Is A Factor? Stop Playin Hard..We All Noe CALI Is The Place For Actors..
that was good.........6/10
I Cant Relate..With All The "Quakes" In CALI..Its Hard To Have Ur Mind In A "Steady State"..
Elevate? In A Room Filled With "Obese Kids"..The Only Time Peeps Think U A "Heavyweight"..
played..ive heard that bein said to fat kids way to much times..3/10
D-ICE "Melted", U Couldnt Stand The "Heat"? Changed Ya Name But Failed To B Discreet..
Failure Creeped..So I Hope U Take "Poetry To Da Heart"..So U Could Finally "Rhyme To Beats"..
lol...that was good...7/10
Cocky Homo..Talk Out Ya Ass So Much..But Never Once Have I Seen This Queer Defend..
Sick When? "CALIPH" Emerged And Then Went To "CALI" Wen Da PH Scale Overtook Him.. **
closer was weak...3/10

OVERALL-20/50

V/...

Feedback is posted for ...

Nice spit fam. Only advice is to lose alot of your ......... and !?!?!?!?!?!?!?!.

Try cleaning up your verses with filler words rather than a bunch of messy things.
lol.

You did fine tho lyrically. Peez.

^^Get Off His Nuts Yo Dam..

DIDN"T REMEMBER GAY VOTING COUNCIL SHIT

Werd Yo..They On His Nuts..Yo Flow Intelligent Let Sum1 Hoo Aint In The Council Vote Yo..
Fuck Y Dey Gotta Be In The Council For?..Let Sum1 Else Vote Yo..Get Off His Nuts..

Dude for real his verse was better, why the fuck would I crew vote, I don't care who takes home the money, it was a fair vote..

^^Ion Think His Verse Was Betta..Ive Seen That Cowards Runs In Packs Line A Hella Of A Times..

Find it and post links....:thumbup:

^and Thats Word.............................................. ..........