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Civil. 03-09-09 08:49 AM

Week 3: ...Compa... 1-0 .vs LP 1-0
 
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Voting closed Saturday Midnight (ET)
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LPMNDCTE 03-09-09 09:20 AM

checkin in..........

LPMNDCTE 03-09-09 10:45 AM

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fag thinks he's ballin, I expose stunners like you
got money out the ass? then, try taking the dildo out too
B.E.S.T. bashes dudes...so what women have you kept
when oppurtunity knocks, ya wife strips on my doorstep
opposing me's stupid, your whole brand is dimmwited
cuz your stamp of approval, has the word dumbass printed in it
kid hasn't eaten in years, despite your desperate pleas
u been a share cropper so long...
..your farm is divided among 7 different families
I'll make your ribs touch your back, not cuz your just skinny
when I refer to an ear of corn, its just a part of your anatomy


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..Compa.. 03-09-09 12:19 PM

Check! ahh LP from rb :thumbup:

..Compa.. 03-13-09 12:28 AM



bringing my weapons'll drop LP n' pound glands
blow out guts to risible flipping patties
cuz you like SONIC's so much your inside a brown bag
make you gag, one fist in your mouth to spit something out
then shove it back..
because LP's are OK but CD's what everyone talks about
make this bitch shout, cuz i got jokes in more ways
to fucking clown you, you'll get a standing ovation
....from pies at your face!
chump your a waste, one hook and it'll leave you stabbed
similar how you was born, ya mom's didn't want a new lad
dumb ass fag, why you think relationships for you don't play right
cuz i'm the kid cudi with your girl.. i can actually go all DAY N' NIGHT



:gfy:

King Solo 03-13-09 10:29 AM

B.E.S.T. bashes dudes...so what women have you kept
when oppurtunity knocks, ya wife strips on my doorstep

vs.

Nothing.


weak battle. that LP nameplay would've been cool if I hadn't seen it flipped that way and better about 4-5 times already. LP had the one punch I liked with that opportunity knocked shit.. it had swag and was cool.

v/ - LP

one way 03-13-09 04:04 PM

Both were pretty weak, lp tried to be more creative and came with soem decent concepts but did'n deliver them well, compa your stucture is off a bit hard to follow, the lp line was ok but like nick said has been done quite a few times....the rest of your stuff was weak little disses need to beef it up and come more creative ad hard.

vote LP

Civil. 03-13-09 08:22 PM

opposing me's stupid, your whole brand is dimmwited
cuz your stamp of approval, has the word dumbass printed in it
B.E.S.T. bashes dudes...so what women have you kept
when oppurtunity knocks, ya wife strips on my doorstep


vs



make this bitch shout, cuz i got jokes in more ways
to fucking clown you, you'll get a standing ovation
....from pies at your face!


Both need to work on wording. lp you did a bit better this week.
keep focusing on directing your concepts though, Compa...idk
what was up with this verse. alot of statements, no real punches
i just picked the bar that showed the most potential, but it really
isnt quoteable material. you didnt have anything harsh. compa 1 thing
i want you to remember...dick jokes...penis lines...gay lines..and lines
talkin about dudes girl n shit. all those are played useless. and in general
almost always turn out wack. so just drop any of those kind of concepts
you think about. both of you need fresh ideas. dont use that dumb shit

v.lp

Magic5 03-14-09 12:20 AM

fag thinks he's ballin, I expose stunners like you
got money out the ass? then, try taking the dildo out too
B.E.S.T. bashes dudes...so what women have you kept
when oppurtunity knocks, ya wife strips on my doorstep

vs.

Nothing

Vote - LP. He came with more than enough to win this.

Wordz AhGod 03-14-09 12:46 AM

B.E.S.T. bashes dudes...so what women have you kept
when oppurtunity knocks, ya wife strips on my doorstep

vs

nothing

weak battle most deffinetly, both dropped pretty bad verses here and didn't seem to have anything of interest so I'll put as much effort into the vote as ya'll did ya'll verses.

V/LP

H.T. 03-15-09 01:19 PM

fag thinks he's ballin, I expose stunners like you
got money out the ass? then, try taking the dildo out too
B.E.S.T. bashes dudes...so what women have you kept
when oppurtunity knocks, ya wife strips on my doorstep

vs

make this bitch shout, cuz i got jokes in more ways
to fucking clown you, you'll get a standing ovation
....from pies at your face!


i dunno i thought this was an alright battle but for more quotables

vote lp

Civil. 03-16-09 10:26 AM

compa loses and gets sent to the jump

lp wins 2-0


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