Rich Gurls (Remix) ft. Ltizzle
 

www.soundclick.com/Paranoid05

Tizzle spits first, i spit second.

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2386386
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2386390

OK.....im feelin the beat lol...

Ltizzle...
first off...quality isnt too great....i cant tell that you have potential right off the bat....your flow is on good at some points...but falls off in a couple...seems like your tryin to cram your words together in some points...gotta work on your pronunciation...delivery isnt too bad to start out with...but it needs some work....you mos def got potential man...no doubt....

Hook = Pure Dopeness LOL...i love it

Para....

you kinda came in weird...almost seemed like you was talking....your quality is also not too good...but...your flow needs some work....make it flow more smoothly...sounds like your letting your words catch up to the beat some....your gotta good voice to be that young though...u can mos def work with that....delivery needs some work also....

you both have potential...it just comes with time...this was mos def worth the listen...keep it up and keep droppin

Send me this beat.............

K....

beat is nice, tizz ur flow is off and u keep havin to kinda get off beat to fit all ur words in.. i like the idea tho

hook is dope....

Para, i'd never heard you before so i dunno what to compare it to, but you didnt seem to have any flow at all in this one.. no hate, but u could have worked on that and emotion... and well, your lyrics could have used some work too....

honest feed fams....