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ak-mixa 12-20-03 12:40 AM

AK-mixa versus lyrical killer
 
RULES
10-15 lines
after check in spit in 20 minutes.
no dick riding
no hate votes






!YA FEEL ME NIGGA!

lyrical_killer 12-20-03 12:54 AM

I spit lines like a venomous snake that cuts in to yo skin/(Like a snake)
Bitch why is you even battlin me,you know imma win/NO shit)
Yo, ho , all I wanna know is why cant you freestyle/(yeah)
Infact when you freestyle you remind me of gommer pile/(fucker)
I'll kill yo whole family wit my fucked up lines/
I kill you like a mix of cars , wit deafs and blinds/(Your dead)
wit my rhymes I could take out your whole universe/
Why do you suck at freestyling is it a curse?/
Im tired of fuckin bitches like this thankin hes cool/
Imma kill dis bitch in dis battle and throw him in a pool/
I sick and tired of talkin bout this fuckin bitch/
Everything this fag says Ill take it all and switch/

lyrical_killer 12-20-03 12:55 AM

yo fuckin turn home boi............................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................Yo reply this shit in at least 30 minutes please............................................ .................................................. ..........peace

ak-mixa 12-20-03 01:13 AM

your a Lyrical homicide dats getting swatted like a FLY
I'm so sorry Lyrical dat I have to whip your ass like "Miracle"
lyrically u getting your 14 yr. old ass merked by obnoxius verbs
u a student dat loves to freestyle,but it ends up in garbage piles
I know now my tongue has bled from your death
seeing your lungs out ya chest and bloody flesh
like my mom said, " Practice makes perfect"
like ya mom said, "Lyrical Practice ain't worth it"
your rhymes get booted off RB more than my computer
if I could post an "L" in ya face they'd call you lyrical loser
you will always make a dope "L" (Loser) platinum RB record
see I jumped your ass more than once like we playing checkers
it's alright you got begginers luck and can't help you a stupid fuck
your mind blowing 14 yr. old fables and fake story tales
will you ever realize your whack lyrical genius won't fail

ak-mixa 12-20-03 01:17 AM

ayo........... lyrical killer good battle man, I haven't had a good battle like dis in a long ass time!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ak-mixa 12-20-03 01:54 AM

uppin............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................

lyrical_killer 12-20-03 01:59 AM

yeah well i tried but were ot gettin any votes homie
fo real no bodys votin............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ....................

ak-mixa 12-20-03 02:03 AM

uppin............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..

ak-mixa 12-20-03 02:04 AM

uppin fuckas............................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...

ak-mixa 12-20-03 09:59 AM

uppin............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .............................

lil' tagger 12-20-03 10:13 AM

yo.....i b tryin 2 vote but wen i do it b sayin "invalid session" or suttin...mah vote wuld b on ak-mixa doe......u got sum nice linezz

Freeman 12-20-03 10:23 AM

ak-mixa, id stop uppin if a was you man.......

ur gona get ur ass DQ'ed.........................
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Slim Thug 12-20-03 10:30 AM

Opening: LK
Punches: LK
Personals: LK
Flow: LK
Structure: AK
Closing: LK

Nigga learn to rhyme..............

Freeman 12-20-03 10:32 AM

BREAKDOWN
________________

AK-MIXA

hardly any fo ur shit rhymed man.... 'FLY' and 'Miracle', incase you didnt know.... do not rhyme

it wud of been a good verse if it had rhymed
not a bad structure, couple of nice punches in there....

LYRICAL KILLER

u dont need to explain each line at the end of it..... stop that now!
urz was pretty basic, but it all rhymed, and thats why you win!

vote - Lyrical Killer

NO HATE

END OF

lyrical_killer 12-20-03 03:50 PM

a yo young head ,,,,,,,,,,, was that a vote fo me or for ak??.............................................. .................................................. .........................................


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