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Spliteyez vs Mcaines
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no d/r votes no crew votes I spit first u spit 20 mins after that I'll be spitting 20 mins after u checked in |
aight man check in...
fuck dat 20 mins shit.............................................. ....i wil post ma shit tho as soon as you av done yours |
Fuck a contest, this slut is getting ripped through his prom dress, that’s a prom-ise
Start deleting u weak shit, while I’m droppin my furious bomb shit I’ll be waitin fo you shit to be dropped cuz…oh im scared cuz you think its on but im sittin here in my chair supressin a yawn I Aint no soldier cause I don’t roll with no army But I’ll tell u this now… U need a fistfull of Napalm to harm me Aw kid, I’ll disalusion you, re-arrange your mind and startle the meaning You can’t spit becuz you just swallowed my piss and gargled my semin You think I can’t beat-you but I grab you by your ankles and de-feet you Please dude, you wonna know how I know ur a bitch? Becuz your panties are see-through Split: u could only spit sick if I gave you a bucket of my throw up Aines: Yeah so what? Lemme just put my beef in your dough-nut Split: fuck your beef, you’re as fucked up as ashanti Aines: you got me… pull me by the hair and oil up my body |
yo man, don't duck
fuckin herb <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< |
Split eyes your lyrics are like glue.....there dry./
i could beat you in this battle even if i was high./ Y did you pm me callin me out??/ im gonna add 2 ur losing drought without a doubt/ its because my lyrics are like death, there is no comeback/ You've won 1 battle out of 14 your battle records poor./ i will help you in this rb game just join my ar-me tour/ i sense warning in your avatar./ my names split eyez im battlin dis super-star./ I grip the mic and receive a standing ovation/ Ive had enuf of you,here you can have probation/ Your stil sitting waiting for ma shit to be dropped/ look around ur ass is the only 1 about 2 be popped(shot)/ look at your last line your beggin me 'please dude'/ you stil wudnt get the votes of the women if u posed nude/ Im done in this battle im a go collect ma cattle/ then drive your bitch ass back 2 seattle.. uppin this shit 4 votes |
Opening: Mc (Keep in mind tho nigga when ur high ur better)
Punches: Se Personals: Mc Flow: Tie Structure: Mc Closing: Se Hmm this battle was pretty wack but ima go with SE...Repay the favor and vote on my battle(s) in the sig... |
before a start....jus gota say.... SE, how the fuck did u get a record like that!?!?! its harsh man *laughs*
but id say ur about to make it better witht this battle..... opener - SE {MC got his the wrong way round!?!} punches - SE {just} Personals - MC Structure - Tie Flow - Tie Closer - SE vote - SE |
^^^ thx to peeps above fo honest votin
don't know bout the record man, just battle some pretty good peeps and recently switched styles, trying to get it back up tho UPPIN....................................... |
split eyes takes it by nailing the flow and creativity....i liked that 2 bar "conversation" thing at the end. Aines, though you seemed to have 'more' punches...they didnt hit hard at all. While split's punches were not as abundant, they hit harder.
my vote: Split both of you guys please hit this up and actualy read the battle closely as if you were ignoring the names...u know what i mean http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99993 |
flow-SE
punches-tie personals-SE opener-SE closer-SE humor-MC entertainment-SE structure-SE vote-SE I WILL NOT POLL VOTE UNTIL ONE OF YOU GIVES AN HONEST VOTE ON MY BATTLE WITH LIL'C |
MC took the personals but all of his punches were played....splty eye came with everthing else and wins with ease
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aight thanks fo honest poll votin
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uppin again
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Yea, well aines did have personals which SE didnt hav...but the personals were weak which kinda sux since he could of won dis battle if he did have good personals. Aines structure is better...but SE had well...Not really better...but he did have stronger punchlines in this battle and that did allow hi 2 take the W over his opponent here.
Vote- Split-eyez |
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