[- Betrayed by Illusions, Ft Fgee,Twizzle&Potent -]
 

Fgee:

The false hope of dreams cast shadows in my head
Elusive silhouettes tantalise my mind before playing dead
The darkness shed or has it just evolved into another form?
Magicians tricks born to fool my perception and scorn
A swarm of dreams shattered by a hideous realms pawn
In this battle I've drawn reality drifts into holographic visions
I can touch them but indecision lets it slip into a prison
A dulled prism of optimism where the bars keeping me arent real
But the pain I feel trapped behind these mental columns of steel
I keep them concealed behind a smiling face grimacing in confusion
Trying to escape fears trying to loose em
But when that needle nestles in my skin…I'm betrayed by illusions

Edicius:

Strength, love.. power.. failure..

The circulation of spinning confusin far from amusing,
it took me down.. after u hooked me on to this illusion.
By setting up this.., betrayal abusing my believe &.. trust,
i told u ill always hold u, my love is real not based on lust.
Power of survival was injected but the flower on arrival died
cuz it was reflected as in a mirror of being rejected,&yes i cried
but fragile devotion controlled& a unstable emotion ground shakin
no fakin love, but yet weak to grow to its final stage,and start's breaking..

Potent:

I know Only Hold,
Resolved from these Be-Trayed Illusions
This Fony Home,
Honed and made Me Stay In Confusions
Evade in the Fusions Of my False Reality
This Sureal Reality gives a Pulse to Amity
Close to Calamity,
But I learned you can find Joy
When Betrayed Illusions Ploy
I Craved Intrusion, of The Truth
I wandered whats Her Excuse?
For me being raised Like This
I know you don't Smite Kids,
So you shouldn't of gave me fake hope
I now stutter, Just so to create Po-Par
Yet I don't believe in the Pope, A Hoax
Was evoked, From Foreign Folks
The lyes now Cooled the Loft
He was a Fan-Atic, Eratic

Twizzle Stix:

I see peace amongst men...Animals not en-dangered
Alternatives to pollutants...global warmings a stranger
Away in a manger...kids can sleep in peace w/ no worrys
Perverts,paedo's murderer's are all just memories buried
People married in union...forever is this pure love's token
Because the new world is beautifull...Hearts never broken
Outspoken by no-one all have a voice...Equality is followed
And there's no-poverty of struggle...nothing need Borrowed
This perfect world i see...painfully ruptured in dellusion...
because every morning i re-awake...To be betrayed by illusion...

Illusions can break u ..or make u ..its up to u ..

Replyed to:
Skitten
Deva
Lyrical Killer

this was nice... every1 came well
i gotta say fgee deffinately had the best verse...
shit was nice... all had good imagry...
hit it well
i really liked potent's change up in there...
i was feelin that.... all of the em' actually...

illness man this was really really good nice flow, vocab etc.

Order of quality in verses:
Fgee
Edicius
Twizzle Stix
Potent

Fgee

The false hope of dreams cast shadows in my head
Elusive silhouettes tantalise my mind before playing dead
The darkness shed or has it just evolved into another form?
Magicians tricks born to fool my perception and scorn
^ very nice

Edicius

Power of survival was injected but the flower on arrival died
cuz it was reflected as in a mirror of being rejected,&yes i cried
but fragile devotion controlled& a unstable emotion ground shakin
no fakin love, but yet weak to grow to its final stage,and start's breaking..
^ illness

Twizzle Stix

I see peace amongst men...Animals not en-dangered
Alternatives to pollutants...global warmings a stranger
Away in a manger...kids can sleep in peace w/ no worrys
Perverts,paedo's murderer's are all just memories buried
^ off the hook

Potent

Evade in the Fusions Of my False Reality
This Sureal Reality gives a Pulse to Amity
Close to Calamity,
But I learned you can find Joy
When Betrayed Illusions Ploy
I Craved Intrusion, of The Truth
I wandered whats Her Excuse?
^ very nice

All came well and I'd go as far as sayin this could be in legends

Thanx for the feedback my lovelys...

But there is no need to say who's was better and what not
Enjoy the piece as a whole...
(only says this because i wasnt the best...lol j/p)

Pz.

^lol

I want to give props to all peeps in this, good verses hoe's = )

It was good.

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word i was feeling it, Yall all came hard on it, nice collaberation, yall should do more aight
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You all have a sort of...newish vide. Try not to stay with the topic so much. When you learn to stray from the path, while still beating it, is when you have mastered it.

lick my lollipop

^Lmao he a chinese = )

''Go left if u want to go right''

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Wonka Runnin This Collab..

It Was Good, I Feel Fgee's Verse Was Strongest Out Of All 4...All Of Which Were Good By The Way...But Fgeeeeee's Stood Out More..

Ya'll Used Good Vocab And Stayed On Topic Well...Overall Pretty Faultless..

Very Nice Collab Kids..

If You Have Time, Check Out "Distorted Mind"..

^Swallow my cum = ) ..hoe = ) :p

Thnx ..

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