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NewPort 12-20-03 04:19 PM

(Point Of View vs. Soft Focus) Taktik vs. Rule
 
Topic : A Life Made Up Of Wants

Check Ins Due By: Saturday, December 22th
Verses Due By: Saturday, Decmeber 27th
No Shows Are A Automatic Loss

No Swaying Votes
No Dick Ridin
No Crew
i Think We Know The General Rules
Just Obide By Them

Taktik 12-20-03 09:49 PM

check!

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Feeble Minded 12-22-03 12:39 AM

rules not on elite list........moved..........>>>@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@

rule 12-22-03 11:34 AM

Check in....i'll have my verse done soon------------------------good luck----------------------------------------------------------------------------

rule 12-22-03 12:08 PM

A Life Made Up Of Wants
From dawn to dusk I awaite my poor parents to slave to give
Me every little material property that makes life easier to live
Pay checks came in every thursday and then vanished quick
There an gone as the past I didn't realise I was selfish 1 bit
Priorities of mine were to obtain a image of toys and candy
I didn't understand the stress I caused for mommy an daddy
Extremly selfish I was but to young to grasp for the right path
So I persued my actions made life fall like sand in the glass
Caused my moms neck to sieze from all the overtime worked
A lump of coal I deserved but my parents didn't want me hurt
Kept giving an giving until there pride was gone in the mist
Finally I got screamed at to not be greedy but I couldn't resist
Infomarcials showin me a blue print to fun claiming friendship
Thus I was a lonely child thought having could loon a tight grip
Broke my parents heart took the arrow out shot from the cupid
Punished me more with flashes in my eyes from being stupid
I was carried away with such greed it evaperated my true life
Departed my family and made my emptiness prevail to strife
No more asking for snowboards, cars and certian type cloths
Praying now that everytime I went to ask for something I froze
Returned favers talked mym mom out of counciling for stress
Told her open her wings to dad and return to the natural nest
I'll behave like a gentlemen behavier to destroy aspects of hell
Wont ask for things so my self esteem comes out of the shell
I'm sorry for leaving you frustrated but this is all I want now
A family a home security to show love that wont break down
I'll impervise for my property in life my familys my propaganda
The only thing that matters....
To me the true property that if I lose it i'll have amnesia
I'll take life for what it is not for what i have or want
Property isn't building blocks it doesnt create happiness
I'm glad I learned something from life and my acomplises
My family the true meaning of what you need to get by
You don't need certian gifts you need family to survive
A life made up of wants created an art of lost and hate
But because of the redirection
The missing pieces of the puzzle were put back in place


^^^there ye go
Good Luck

Peace

NewPort 12-27-03 09:37 PM

Rule Wins via Taktik No Showed
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Mods Close This

rule 12-31-03 10:07 AM

uppen to get this closed
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