Crooked-Comical Vrs OneMeanSaltine
 

Alright Man Spit First

Checkin in yo....I spit first huh? this otta be fun anyway...good luck dawg....................................

OMS back wit his chronic+belief,
I only battled this dude for comic+relief
Just lay the battle and I'm on+it+wit+beef,
My pockets packed like a sauna+wit+heat,
If I detect neglect of respect I'm eject a set from the tech,
Let it Bisect your neck, disect your chest, and inject where you digest,
Crooked little man wit a crooked little verse,
Get sent down a crooked road in a crooked little hurse,
Dude needs a mortician, fuck callin a nurse to patch+him+up,
Drive back through kill you wife, as for yo kids, snatch+em+up.

Alright Nice .. Good Luck To You To Man

Im The King Of The ~Castle~ Your A Dirty ~Rascal~ In My Court Yard / /
Steppin To Me Your ~Ass Will~ Get Fucked Up Like My Report Card / /
This Is A ~Mismatch~, I ~Dispatch~ ~This Rap~ With Power / /
This ~Bitch is Crap~ , Ill ~Diss His Ass~ And He'll Get Devoured / /
Like The Twin Towers , Your Gettin Demolished / /
You Suck And You Got Less Potential Then An Alcoholic / /
Im The Best , You Cant Contest Youll Get Messed By My Text / /
You Have No Experiance , Like A Priest And A Nun Havin Sex* / /
You Shouldnt Even Step To Me , In Music Im Ruthless / /
I Raise The Roof So Much We No Longer Know Where The Roof Is / /


Peace

* Priests And Nuns Cannot Have Sex Because They Sighn A Vow When Becoming Them



************************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** ******

Both yall was hot but i gotta give more props 2 croked wit that nun and priest line but u get props 2 saltine

Thanx Man .. if Only you Had 100 Posts Your Vote Would Count

Damn

Thanx anyways Man


Uppppppin *********************** # 1 ************************************************** ***************

they don't sign nything dog, they take i meaning it's a promise between them and God, nothin is signed, nice punchline though...

OK!

UPPPIN # 2 ************************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** ******************************

shit both yall was hott heres tha breakdown
flow-crooked
opener-both
closer-both
body-crooked
multis-crooked(saltine tried but no sense made

vote-Crooked

thats cool yo, but where did I make no sense? it's pretty obvious in there, I have been doin this for a while...you need to poll your vote too...

UPPIN # 3 ************************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** ***************************************

multi's- tie (to many....annoyin)
meti4's- tie
punches- tie
structure- none (horrible both)
wordplay- none
flo- none
enjoyed- none

overall- tie (what can i say shit happens)

opener - crooked
punches - crooked
multis - one
personals - crooked
closer - crooked

weak battle yall elevate

Crooked-Comical won dis battle because of that nun punchline lmao. Dat shit was ill, had me laughin hard.

Im The Best , You Cant Contest Youll Get Messed By My Text / /
You Have No Experiance , Like A Priest And A Nun Havin Sex* / /

Ya both do need 2 fix up ur structure tho, but crooked's was better, atleast its closer 2 bein
xxxxxxxx
xxxxxxxx
xxxxxxxx

than OMS's.
Dont get me wrong, OMS had a pretty good verse, but u just need work on sum things like structure. Well u fix that stuff up, ur punches hit harder, and crooked's better structure allowed his punches 2 hit harder. Good job both of u.

Vote- crooked

Hit me up wit sum honest votes wit the battles in ma sig plz. thx.