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High Class Vs Rule
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No crew votes No hate votes Regular Rules.... Spit A.S.a.P No unexplained votes, and remember to poll vote. G'luck Peace |
My verse...drop soon man...good luck
Ya leader an mine clashed emotionaly whydja get involved Say'n ya battle Deacon Ls promised no problems resolved Your either dead an gone or gone an dead take your pick Tryin to go higher in ranks for D.O.I so you ride WL dick Judgin by your character ya got terets speakin disabilities You idlize my crew thats why you diss for hibitie jibatees In school you dissed to flirt an flirten turns to harrasment We all no ya queer now ya can come out the basement High Class couldn't exscalate to my level if riden astroid You try clinging to my ass..annoying like a fuckin hemroid Battle you topical next an write about your death granted You should of kept your mouth closed took life for granted Now I suppose you didn't mean to purpose to this penalty You broke Rules when you came into SF's lyrical facility Frustrated and obligated to kill you..HC..lyrically paralized Couldn't move to the future ahead of ya ....I see death in ya eyes |
Aight, Im checkin in. Ive been on writers block. ANd im startin to come out of it... So, Checkin In BIaTch
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High Class Verse
Your punches are glares, Mine leaving you Lyrically Impared
Think your so hot, Me winning this battle is your only ' NightMare ' Fake keepings leave you sleeping , ya Crews Bitchen Repeating Your crew claims ' Topical ' Cause other-wise you take beatings This is just the start, I impart death and strain into your heart You might tell ' The Weather ' But Rap is Not your ' Art ' Annoying like locus, Rhymes you write continou to be hopeless You cant win, You punches are to ' Soft ' and lost ya ' Focus ' Your line now rope-less, Flow is Leak'n... Rap not worth keepin Who U ganna Dick-Ride next, Allready Been Edicuos and Deacon Bitch, Learn your lesson... Your just a left out Blessin This battle will have you running back to ' Soft Focus Confessions ' Im a seal to your fate, 0 your rate, just take your place Next tell ' File ' to Re-write ya verse, cause spelling aint your only mistake... --------------------------------- - Conclusion on Punches - Line 1-2 ( Nightmare was a rap of his ) Line 3-4 ( His crew is Topical, and never wants to Battle ) Line 5-6 ( 'The Weathers Art' is a rap of his, You know what it means LOL ) Line 7-8 ( Im Clown'n on the Crew Name ' Soft Focus ' Line 9-10 ( He seems to always Dick-ride them and Crew ) Line 11-12 ( File- A Crew Member... Fixed spelling mistakes in his rap, befor he put it into Open Mic ) ---> Well, thats my verse. I know I won because of major personals. Or thats just my opinion on this match. G/L Rule OUT -High Class a.k.a Confusion |
good verse...lets get some votes in now...pz
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Sorry bout this everyone, I fucked up on this shit...
Lines 1-2 ( ' Nightmare ' was a rap of his ) Lines 3-4 ( His crew is Topical, and never wants to Battle ) Lines 5-6 ( ' The Weather Art ' was a rap that he wrote ) Lines 7-8 ( Im clowning on there crew name of course ' Soft Focus ' ) Lines 9-10 ( He be dick ryden his crew members ) Lines 11-12 ( ' Soft Focus Confessions ' is a thread in there crew forum ) Lines 13-14 ( ( File- A Crew Member... Fixed spelling mistakes in his rap, befor he put it into Open Mic ) Dont even think of that shit up there... Sorry again... Thanks Rule, you know we hommies... LOL G/L UPPIN OUT -High Class a.k.a Confusion |
UPPIN UPPIN UPPIN, I know I voted on other battles, cmon people and return the favors please.... UPPIN UPPIN UPPIN #2
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UPPIN UPPIN UPPIN, I know I voted on other battles, cmon people and return the favors please.... UPPIN UPPIN UPPIN #3
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opener: tie
closer: high punches: tie structure: tie vocab/wordplay: rule multies: tie metas: rule overall: rule this was a hell of a close battle, an rule takes it by an hiar. keep up the competetiveness!!! PLZ HIT UP THIS BATTLE WITH A FAIR VOTE, AS I HAVE TAKEN THE TIME TO HIT UP YOURS http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99197 |
OOOOOOHHH not bad ya'll..nice battle
BREAKDOWN- punches-High metas-Rule Flow-Both Structure-both sustainment-High Vocab-Rule Complexity-Rule Opener-High Closer-High Overall-High he jus had betta punches..Rule was classy n complex but dint hit that hard pz MAKE SURE YA'LL HIT THIS UP PLZ PZ http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100546 |
some nice complex shit from rule as usual.....
nice verse from High Class aswell tho.... sum close shit tbh.... opener - tie closer - high punches - tie structure - tie vocab - rule multi's - tie metas - rule vote - rule good luck with this both of ya....no hate laterz |
for the record..... im tryin to poll....
but it wont let me!!!?!?!?!?! duno y....ive got 5 wins so it shud let me shudnt it? :S sorry.... |
Just so yall know befor you make the votes. ( This is not going to B.I. Deatained ) There is a hole bunch of personals in there. So you should take that into consideration... UPPIN UPPIN UPPIN#3
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This was amazinly close, Anyway L's breakdown:
punches - high class personals - tie flow - tie creativity - rule opener - high class closer - high class OVERALL - high class Every category was really close. Props to both |
It wont let me poll in here so get a mod to add my vote. Dunno why it aint lettin me poll tho..................
Peace!!! |
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