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[ - Loneliness, Ft.Edicius- ]
[ - Loneliness, Ft.Edicius- ]
Sphere Sittin in the corner my former visions decive my mind Submissin for a listen glistens to depict in the lines Left conflicting at times for people to feel my array Extremes of feelin youl find means they just walk away Darkness turns to expression..as i learn a lesson in life Of departin from stressin n switchin my gun for a knife Fuck strife it brings isolation….the hinge of the end On the brink of suffication with no help from a friend People forced to resolve in a sollution of disolvin away This shits about diluting ya tears..to live the next day Edicius Memories in the dark corners of my mind a lost soul, without a goal,so hard to find & realizing reality=exsisting more in dreams than i real life thats more filled with schemes Feelings of emptyness,flowding wrong way's I could pray lay back on my bed and sway asking for help from above give me back love But i realised it had nothin to do with holyness my persistance of excistence is just lonlynes Links up Soon |
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DopeNess..
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all these people so little feedback
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Wow, i'm kind of depressed now.
But it was nice, and short to the point. It flowed well with you 2 togehter, thought at times seemed a little choppy. But wasnt bad enough to ruin the piece Good usage of vocab, multis yaay i liked how you both gripped the emotion thought now like i said, i feel kinda sad |
^Choppy lmfao ..
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not bad collab
feel what the topic was about and the way you did it eddy...u need to improve your grammer man,..lol getting like fuckin nelly n chingy with their right hurr n shit for reall i thought spheres was slightly better...and more comprehendable i liked both verses however for what they were the last two lines of spheres was the best from him ed...your first two lines were the best imo props |
Sphere, you had average content, and an average flow, but for some reason certain lines of yours struck me as real powerful ..
Fuck strife it brings isolation….the hinge of the end On the brink of suffication with no help from a friend ^ that was one of the coolest lines in the entire piece. i felt a lot of emotion, and it was a mildly dope read. more originality in your topic might have made it really good. edicius. yours really wasn't that good. it seemed rushed, and you lacked in overall emotion because you forced a lot of lines to save the flow which wasn't even that extraordinary in the first place. but ehh, it wasn't too bad, or too good, pretty average. keep writing though. peace |
Ayo nice cipher...
Nice flow and vocab...I don't have any critiques T'is was good... structure wise on point... could have written a little more...You both expressed yourselves well..understood where ya was coming from...nice... would be cool to do a cipher with you two... Laters... |
thanks
keep it commin :) |
2 min key ..
Glad yall love me.. Up^ |
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Agree on the most, ..but not on the forced lines in to save the flow, .. = ) ..thnx..tho |
you did force them bitch don't argue.
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Ayo this was a killer collabo... i was feelin both from start to finish ... flow was on point... ish was there... just what i likes to see from two Text/Mc's.. fa sho dunny
keep doin big thangs... Caesar On3 |
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