revenge_archer vs McProfit
 

ok u know da rules

10 lines
no d/r
no hate
no crew

u spit first. luck to u

aight checkin in good luck to you too...............................................
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ok ive checked in now too, so wen ur ready but hurry my dads kicking me off soon.........................

I spit so hard, fast and messy
People think I'm wack but It's my lyrical ectasy/
He's from the land of torture/
Must be no clit just dick for every merking/
At the rate I'm goin this boys gonna be stuffed more than a christmas turkey
Get outta my face cuz I'll wreck yours with distaste with anything just to get you outta the black race/
You don't belong as a negroe/
Your best song goes along the lines of Enrique's song Hero/
You aim at something but all you hit is nothing cuz you shootin blanks/
Har-Fuckity har you suck dick I'm gonna make you walk the plank.

his profile said he was from the land of torture....... and some fuckin how I was reminded of a pirate. I dunno just watched Pirates of the Carribean it's a pretty good movie.

ok its time i sent this emcee back to tennessee
cos this is a non profit game, cos your rapping to the lowest degree.
but if you disagree then i can agree, you couldnt pay the admission fee to any under sea dream.

but heres something thats extremly free, my white female ass stupid.....go back to a. b. c

dammit i totally blonded dat and just realised i only put 4 lines *slaps head*

oh well thts wot ill put forward you will prob win cos u put all ten lines unless u will allow me to write the other 6.

(the other 6 lines)

if ive gotta rap then ive gotta smack.....ya momma for letting u come back after you had dat asthma attack.

geeks like u freaks like me we couldnt win cos geeks minus 3.

i wish i could just send u back, but im afraid you afraid with a 'no return stamp'

well this is the end of my rap, ill send u a quater crack...and i hope you dun come back

go on write the other 6 try and get it within 10 mins thoug aight?
Peace!............................................ ................................................

i wish i could just send u back, but im afraid you afraid with a 'no return stamp'

the second afraid was supposed to be 'arrived'

and im aware all together i wrote 9 lines oh well.

comeon peeps vote dun sleep!

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Flow = Profit
Structure = Profit
Wordplay = Profit
Punches = Profit

Overal = profit

REPAY THE FAVOUR PLEASE WITH AN HONEST VOTE


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100140

simple as this.....

profit takes everythin

dont need to type out all the opener, closer n all that shit....

vote - profit

hit this up honestly plz.......

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...955#post1004955

thanks

laterz

yo you both need work on flow and shit this was not a good battle at all shit..

but i have to vote for profit cause atleast he had something in his verse to judge..

vote mc p

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