yakka' Territory
 

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this is an audio verse....bout where im from....oh and dont start saying the structure is fucked...lol..



Now I do what I want within reason, a harbouring fucking heathen
Believing in myself and anyone else who’s got my feelings,
Who gives a fuck if the world is fucking wheezing?, it isn’t fucking breathing
..Im leaving.. Fuck this misconceiving.. There’s more important issues
Like the fucking guys who misuse and don’t share me their crystals
Yes Its pistols… at dawn.. Unreformed ready to scorn leave the fucka’s torn

In my town, none of this shit is going down don’t take kindly to being clowned
I found.. That, through living n building relations round.. don’t be profound
You’ll be confound.. cos this neighbourhood is run by us from Ashing-town
…From the right side da river wansbeck.. Have respect.. For the local di-a-lect
Or well infect n dissect without regret or losing breathe
Be direct n face to face, earn trust without disgrace, stand firm in ya fucking place
Cos ‘Pit yakka’ territory leads the race.
…Been rolling the streets like our fucking blunts, bout 10 years every day, every fucking month
That’s the brunt that’s fronts our thinking, along with E’s coke acid speed n drinking
Without sinking.. Rising.. Comprising of tight mates who’s relying on each other like food on fucking plates
-It irritates.. When outsiders come in laughing, listening to pop music dressed in the latest fashion
Following the crowds, that entraps them... They got me gasping.. I cant fucking breathe
Been brought up in an area where the Minor’s naturally wheeze,
Had to be tough.. The conditions were abnormally rough.. Be prepared to be regularly cuffed, cos the law is totally fucked.
There’s Enough.. Stuff.. be going down.. From thieving to kids joy riding who messing around
Its underground buried in the terraced streets.. hidden from the arm of the fucking police
On a quick release, if ya turn ya back ya fucking fleeced
Bitches wanting beef…out on the beer be prepared for grief.. Jus take a leaf
Out of the ‘yakka book’, stand tall.. Fist to fist, if ya lose come back with the crew they fucked with-
-I insist to this, aint miffed or bothered, we got our backs like no others, got it covered
Aint getting smothered, cos we’re like the ‘Band of’ fuckin ‘Brothers’…….

some on peeps..wheres the critiques???........pZ

this was pretty good i thought....i wont comment on the structure then lol since its for audio...your vocab was good like it usually is....flow was alright, it stayed on point through out the piece i thought, it didnt really fall off....overall i thought this was pretty good...keep at it.

thnx masta......why's this getting slept on...it aint that long.....pZ

ehh????????????? come on peeps....

yeah..not a great text song..would be awesome in audio..likemvocab..and multis in the beginning..simple topic..it's cool..

this was illness i liked it all through

this was a tight piece.......i liked the vocab n mulits u had....the structure is off but like u said ...its fo audio so itll sound tight as hell when u put it on audio.......other than that it was dope all de way...keep doin ur thing

Peace

blah the structure fucking sucked!!!!!!!












































jk lol nice shit would like to hear it though

this was a pretty interesting drop cuz you flowin from yo heart. i notice it. keep on doing it.

nice piece
vocab was good
LOL @ da structure