PoiSon-PeN vs. Fatalstryke
 

aight deadline is tomorow till midnight to spit..10-16 lines

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\\Rookie emcee on tha scene'a things//

aiYO...im full'a lyrical disposition//fight'n this battle like'a pissed off politician//rhymes i'm spittin got no repetition// poisen pen on my jock cuz i rocked his brain//comin down hard on'em like turential rain// 1 cant even maintain my type of mind frame// got cats twisted think'n im gifted, something like David Blaine//this cat couldnt roc'a mic if it was made from stone//at the end theres one winner, i stand alone. . . .

U have been served..............

I light and toke dro as I write each dope flow/
Only time you win battles is when the other MC dont show/
Im the all time great rhyme heavyweight/
you goin down is guaranteed,like head from nymphos on the first date/
Dont call yo self Fatalcasue at worst, you a runny nose/
You might as well be a model casue all you ever do is pose/
please,you fake MC,aint on my degree of skills/
Im hardcore,thug galore keepin it hard like viagra pills/
Im so nice,every part of my diss is smart and precise/
I leave you confused scratchin yo head like niggaz wit lice/
Once,twice,thrice damn how many times can I murder this rhyme/
How dare u challenge me when you probly lose battles to mimes/

Peace!

VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE.............................................. .................................................. ........................PEACE!

dont sleep on this shit cmooooon vote vote vote vote vote vote................................ya VOTE

opener: Poisen
closer: poisen
punches: poisen
flow:: poisen
structure: poisen
win: poisen.
Elevate, check this out please http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100235

AInt no ones vote'n wuts tha dill with this.... Can we go some more bars or are we only allowed one round???? halla atcha boi pen...

we jus leave it for peeps to vote and keep uppin it until we get enugh votes ...............................><|||||||||-PoiSoN-PeN|||||||||><

VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE........................VOTE GODDAMMIT! LOL

UPPIN THIS SHIT FOR FUCKIN VOTES..........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

fatalstryke fo sho... i wasnt feelin poisons words.
he just keeps usin the same thing. you need to elevate and stop writin peotry...

structure - poison
opener - fatal
flow - fatal
enjoyment - fatal
closer - poison

vote: fatalstryke

keep elevatin poison. no hatin...

overall vote: poison

if u think i lost this battle ure retarted man u jus mad cause i said yo last battle was whack and u rhymed like 3 words........................ELEVATE