A lil somethin
 

I'm conversatin wit this chick
slick spittin fluent game
wit a rush from this liquor fluid
pumpin thru his veins
Under the influence and I knew she was the same
wanna slumber wit this chick slip a brew into her brain
open up to me ma and introduce ya pain
slide my hand up yo skirt
and between ya two legs
freak nasty in the room wit you nude
in the bed
cool ya wit the jewels that droops from the neck
I'mma true vet nothin new to the sex
Seduce in the cuch while chew on the breast
get ya wet and srew in a pool of our sweat
and I knock boots plus the srews out the bed
Im' loosin my breath tryna screw you to death
enuff jewels on the neck
a have her cool and refreshed
glued to her flesh til I prove I'm the best
I'm cute and finessed
to hoes, includin myself

Re: A lil somethin
 

k dont really know why its here twice
and post your three links to replies, or they're titles, or this will get closed.
i'll reply to it after you follow the rules

~Tera~

This was dope, i was feeling the multies, great fluidity here it was mesmerizing, the topic was well presented and the ending was crazy, almost as if you were jsut peeking around a corner after having made it through a dim corridor as if u were looking back past what just happened, something deeper, definitely feeling this one, 1luv.

Thank you for your compliments and advice. I all can do is my thang and get betta'. Word of Mouf

I'm one of dopest rappers in the universe!

^ lol....alot better than your 'openmic' work..I will give you that...matter fact this was a dope piece...

It was humorous. I dunno, maybe you didn't mean to make it that way. But it was. The style, the wording...

A nice little humourous piece to me. But hey, maybe i'm just looking at it wrong.

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