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Technician vs CarsonJetx2
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blind spit check in asap verses due about 20 minutes from checkin in no recycling/feeding crew votes allowed(same crew) no dr, h, bs , herb votes :laugh2: |
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Chek...Tech's retarded^'one hands bigger than his head-
Swolen from Ass'end fistin jus to getta few vic's ahead- 14-2 wit dik landslides from voters who aint gotta clue- Even Dominator wont let tech rep the real sig from our crew- Part of the agency?-please..he aint "policing the masses- He's competetin with trash' but now I'm breakin his glasses- cloud 420'smokin too much grass'jet's rec will catch up fast- move on past-left this kid feelin a literal"blast from the past"- I got too much class-this kids a wasp in the game witta nerd name- His claim to fame? nuttin but leavin us wit his mom to blame- |
Shit, I'm not takin' this man serious his name appears Carson
Bitch, your verse is whack your delerious claimin' yearly Arson Couldn't put fire on a thread even when burnin' your own shirt Tryna tell me you aint bitch but I'm learnin' that you Own skirts Can't win! shit you can't flow, Jet's not sick just an infected hoe On the street collectin' doe, I rape'em teach'em rejection's show CJ throws punches at Tech, but like air, theres nothin ta catch You take'a stab in the dark at best, but I just apart that guess Clipse? I dump in the rest, in ya CD player bumpin' your chest Btter than most I bet, but sayin' you can beat Tech is a stretch |
Aight heres how it goes..both short n snappy..nice
BREAKDOWN- punches-Carson flow-both structure-both metas-Carson Vocab-both Sustainment-both Multis-Tech..dint use them to effect tho Opener-Carson Closer-Tie Overall-Carson Jus came sustained w/ better punches pz MAKE SURE YA'LL HIT THIS UP PLZ PZ http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100491 |
Punches-Tech
Vocab-CJ WordPlay-Tech Opener-CJ Closer-Tech Flow-Tech Vote-Tech Close match, return da fava http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100267 |
aight punches carson............i like the sig punch good stuff
flow...both had basic rhymes but carson had a better flow... finisher....didnt see much there...... wordplay...maybe a lil....lol aight i'll say carson |
damn...honestly Carson got this....he had better personals and harder punches than Tech in my opinion....Tech had a better structure and flow....but this is the line that won the battle
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BREAKDOWN Punches - Carson (hit harder) Personals - Carson (same as above) Metas - Tech Wordplay - Tech Flow - Tech Structure - Tech Vocab - Carson RhymeScheme - Carson Creativity - Carson Overall - Carson gets this in all honesty with just having harder punches.....good read from u both though..no hate...just a vote..... peace |
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I was feelin Carson more..... more personals.... a lil more overall..... these guys are both in my crew so im not breaking down because I have to work now... I just had to frop a vote
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lol, i would vote in this battle but either opponent I voted for would be a hate vote since tech beat me 5-0 (U bastard) and carson dropped a whack vote wit me vs KaSSidy and me vs sphere. But if I had 2 decide who won, I would choose technician. His verse to me, hit harder than Carson's and his punches were a lot better. Like carson's opener, i wasn't feelin that, if it was a picture, the gun and hand would b closer 2 the camera making them appear bigger than the rest of the body.
Vote- Technician (but not polling tho) Can u hit me up with honest votes in my battles plz. They are in my signature. Thanks. |
feelin carsonjet more on this...beta flow n punches but i've seen beta from tech!
vote-carson can ya hit up my battle wiv rule in my sig wiv an honest vote....thanx! |
Chek...Tech's retarded^'one hands bigger than his head-
Swolen from Ass'end fistin jus to getta few vic's ahead- not sayin much.. good flow 14-2 wit dik landslides from voters who aint gotta clue- Even Dominator wont let tech rep the real sig from our crew- nice personal here.. best line of ur verse Part of the agency?-please..he aint "policing the masses- He's competetin with trash' but now I'm breakin his glasses- dont see how this connects.. kinda filler cloud 420'smokin too much grass'jet's rec will catch up fast- move on past-left this kid feelin a literal"blast from the past"- not bad.. flow wasnt real smooth i caught the concept tho I got too much class-this kids a wasp in the game witta nerd name- His claim to fame? nuttin but leavin us wit his mom to blame- blah not feelin the closer Shit, I'm not takin' this man serious his name appears Carson Bitch, your verse is whack your delerious claimin' yearly Arson kinda weak for an opener.. Couldn't put fire on a thread even when burnin' your own shirt Tryna tell me you aint bitch but I'm learnin' that you Own skirts lol funny.. Can't win! shit you can't flow, Jet's not sick just an infected hoe On the street collectin' doe, I rape'em teach'em rejection's show filler.. not sayin much to your opponent here, first line was kool CJ throws punches at Tech, but like air, theres nothin ta catch You take'a stab in the dark at best, but I just apart that guess good flow.. not bad.. need more punches Clipse? I dump in the rest, in ya CD player bumpin' your chest Btter than most I bet, but sayin' you can beat Tech is a stretch better closer than carsons still not real hard flow-tech punches=tie personals-carson creativity-tie consistancy-tech iight.. carson came better here than he did against me.. the sig line hit him hard the only personal in the battle.. tech got u in flow basically.. i didnt spot any real hard punches from either.. nothin to catch from tech was kool.. tech got consistancy he had less weak lines.. it was kinda tied to me so i had to read it again and base the vote on consistancy ill lines to weak lines.. and i think tech came a titty bit more consistant, altho carson had the heavy hitter of the battle.. this was damnc lose to be honest.. and i know i live near tech n all but ive never voted dishonestly in a battle in my life regaurdless of my relationship with the person.. i think he edged this with a cunthair.. take it or leave it vote-tech |
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