YoungAllstar -VS- .:FreemaN:.
This My Check In |
aight, only jus seen this........only jus got ur PM.....
sorry ima key my verse up now..... good luck..... laterz |
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u best spit.........................
im gona spit now................ ur comin up to ur 1 hour limit that you set..... whereas ive been busy..... and still keyed mine up in bout 15-20 mins...........whilst doin other things!! spit asap man.... good luck......... |
aight, im doin 10 lines, so u can drop 10 aswell.........................
more than that and people get bored...... here it comes................................ |
now you've got to be just plain stupid, cuz u accepted --
ur verse will be so wack, the mods will have you rejected -- you want an hour so you can think of summin worthwile to write -- there aint no point in tryin dawg, my verse is gona be tight -- and how the hell are you gona come up with 5, let alone 10 bars -- ur punches will have me laughin, where as mine'll have u seein stars -- in a way im glad we are battlin, because my wins can then go up to number six -- then u can take this merking and show ur friends while comparin the size of ur dicks -- but really what can you expect from sum1 hu goes by the name of 'YoungAllStar' -- the only way u make a 'sik' sound is if u hurlin on the backseat of a car -- |
where the fuk r u man!?!?!?!?
fukin make me drop then u run off........ pussy............................................. ........ |
yo can some1 plz help me how do i pm a mod!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?! i need help cuz the dude i was supposed to battle did drop his flow in time and idk what to do?!
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Elevate Pleaze.. Ur Not Worthy Competition... Let Me Sho U Something... LMAO
Like [i]*Midgets At A Bar B Que,* The Steaks-R-To-High, Like I Wuz *Destoryin Books* I'm *Breakin-Ya-Spine*... Put An Ache-In-Ya-Mind, Like I Wuz *Chokin Mother Goose,* I'm Shakin-Ya-Rhymez You Being Undefeated Is Just-A-Jinx, Take A *Gat To A Puzzle* But Still Couldn't *Bust-A-Piece*... Get *Swept Off The Floor* Like I Dust-Ya-Feet, Lyrical *Saddam* To Take Over *Nations* And Now You Can't Trust-Ya-Peeps I'm A *Criminal* U Can Say I'm *Ruthless-Wit-Gore*, Freeman, U Ain't Get *Money For Ya Thoughtz* Ur *Useless-N-Poor*... After Dis Battle U Should Visit A *Dentist* Cuz You'll B *Toothless-N-Sore* And Da Way My Text Smackz U Wit *Tiles* U Can Say I'm *Abusive-To-Floors* Young'll Park-"Thugz" And I Also Part-Slutz, Cuz Freeman's *Gateway Used* Not Dope He's Just A *Start Drug*... I'll Have ya Harmed-Cuzz, Doing Damage To My Name Is Like *Scratchi Diamonds Wit Fist,* Its Hard To *Mark Us* Silence Freeman, I'm To Hot-Ta-Listen, Like *Fruity Weed From Bad Soil,* I'll Leave Free To *Rot-In-High-Positions*... I Got-Ya-Eye-Missin, X'd Ya Middle Cuz 1Like *Multiplication Problemz* Freemans Not-In-My-Division |
yougn allstar murdered him with that wordplay........... thats tight...... 4 real......
punches bettter... not on flow but... everythihng else was better.... youngallstar-vote |
opener: young
closer: tie punches: young strucutre: freeman vocab: tie wordplay: young overall: young young fix ya structure, an freeman jus step up ya game. no hate PLZ DROP AN HONEST VOTE ON THIS, AS I HAVE TAKEN THE TIME TO VOTE ON THIS BATTLES http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...135#post1009135 |
LMAO.. Uppin
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no offence young, but your rhymes have the structure of my obese aunty :p and what's with all the text decorations? :\
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They're Not Decorations.. They Make Certain Points Stand Out... So Fuk U And Ur Aunt.. Vote Or Bounce
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Re: YoungAllstar -VS- .:FreemaN:.
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then you drop 3 hours later........ took me 20 minutes to key mine whilst doin other things.... u take 3 hours! where u bit that shit from man? uppin #1 |
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