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2 hot 4 TV
The way I get on ya don't know u won't lightly shine
Yo shit is fake lik coppin uptownz without nike signs Been hot 4 a minute tryin 2 get betta in new wayz Treat my gurl lik garbage & take her out on Tuesdayz Ya try 2 portray a gangsta image so ya try 2 stay in back Till we leave yo mouth wit mo wirez than radioshack O.G.s need 2 quit actin cause they actin da same I'm nice so don't trip lik runnin on platformz afta da rain I make a nigga run 4 his gun & drop the loot Cause they know I've been round nigga lik a prostitute Ya ain't gonna make it anyway so ya start 2 drag I got rocs bigger than Missy Elliot when she was in garbage bagz St8 up from Queenz Ny I don't even rep da state Cause yo flow lik benched playaz second rate Ya act lik u're real gangsta stop da actin I bag shawties u wanna touch boyz lik Michael Jackson Put da heat 2 u & yo cru & make yo man sweat Only tyme u a convicted fellon if u play Grand theft Uninterested in gettin signed wit all these fool lables Plus I can sing & rap & get mo dow than pool tablez Display yo thoughtz I'm ready 2 rip asses I'll leave u wit mo cutz then catz who skip classes Got beef wit me I got memory I rememba all namez U can b cavalier but I'm da hype & I ain't Lebron Jamez |
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thought the flow was the best part of this..the resst seemed basic....up ya scheme...add some complexity...mulits n internals...would help the read along...add interest...as is.......well, ok....pZ
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Still no links, Closed for now, if u want this re-opend pm u if u willin to follow the rules, and i will re-open..
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