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People keep telling me my structure really sucks the fat one. Any suggestions on how to fix it??

yeah this is what they mean by bad structure:


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/\ meaning all the lines are not within the same length of each other

this is what it should look like:

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/\ see how they are a lot closer in length?? that is good structure

maybe your bars are uneven... check to see if you have too much filler in your verse... that should even your lines out.