brainz numb
 

I think of shit so cold,my brains numb freezing
I spit razor lines so sharp my tounges bleeding
Deep in this G thing, im only 15,13 I was dealing
12 I started rapping, since then ive bin renlentlesly practising
I was whack at it, but kept on trying till,cracked it
Now my hooks break jaws,and punclines smash glass kid
Plus Ive seen more than acid trips, I spit my life in my rhymes fuck
bragging shit/
I dont get clever wit my rhymes,not yet i stick to ill freestyles
Me and my crew, got it on LOX, like kiss and styles
Man growing ups just wild,i grew up to quick i should be 20 by now//


tell me wot u think and how to improve please

You need to read the sticky thread about the rules...You posted a open mic before without links and you posted another one without links or names....get the links/names for your other one and get them for this one...and PM me the links/names for this one and i will re-open this for you, but until then this is Closed