Death around the co'na
 

Verse 1:
I see death around the corner
while I breathe weed and post wit a nine
Cause inside me a vibe cries I'm closer to dyin'
Lost in the game nothin I can do but try to survive
hang in fo life around the hood where my enemies lie
watch niggas die witnessed the cold game
at the age of 13 I seen a nigga's brains blown 'way
I mourn in sorrow- pray today and hope fo tomorrow
Drankin out the bottle tryna drown out all my problems
It's gettin harder and poppa don't want a thug
A problem child caught in drama but I don't give a fuck
momma careless and sister hates me to death
Sometimes I feel the need to put a gun to my head
And spray myself
It's somethin crazy bein trapped in the ghetto
growin up poor lord please open up the door to heaven
Cold stressin adolescent Roll strapped wit a weapon
Out of control askin fo a deathwish
But I feel I'd have bad first impression in front of God eyes
Reprentin fo the sins I commit in these times
Havin dreams I'mma die and fly away free
witness love like no other but It's locked away deep
So when I'm sleep that's the only time I'm at peace
but often tortured by the beast tryna unleash
It's gettin colder as I grow older
now I can't trust bitches cause somethin cryin their cold work
Let alone niggas who smile in my face phony
actin like friends but they really ain't homies
out of focus mixed emotions feelin hopeless
I can't cope it put the nine to my brain and explode it
I see death around the corner...........:huh:

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KatZ.frost
N litEnd

Word~Perfect

that was good. nice wordplay nice drop. good structure.

this shit was raw man i liked this shit alot

Real shit dog, i feel ya. Thats how it be around my way. But you know how to make a propa drop sound street and concrete. tight shit dog, i'll be checkin you shit out.

..good wordplay..good flow..good content..it was pretty good overall..alot better than your other posts...