Truth~Is~Hard
 

song truth is hard 2 recover/
truth is i wanna be ur lover/
pain consists of watching u sorrow/
never must u ask will i be there 4 u tomorrow/


How can it be,man can control your life and u juss walk right by me
watever u want that i will give, all i want is 4 u 2 have a betta life 2 live
u cry and still u go-back, i luv ya gurl...if only u would know-that
pain is hard 2 live-to, care and lovin is everything ill give-u
im not sayin leave ur man, unless ur sure 2 take my hand
with or without me, ill be there, 2 love and charis ur care
simple is but problems happen, this between me & u no audience clappin
he lives 2 forget, if i luv but cant have i still wouldnt regret we met
shit happens but secrets R kept, the way i wish i was there wen u slept
wat can i do 2 give you it-all, i care 4 u but wat if it turns 2 love i fall
ur beautiful dont say your-not,like ur man says he'll call but shit once again he forgot
sick 2 my stomach the way he make you cry,why cant i have u by my side
what did i do 2 deserve to watch u get treated bad by this man wit wat nerve
i know u see it, u say ur strong and better then this..so plz be-it
instant connection between 2 of us, but still our lives seem farther distant
we play around nothin 2 bad,how mad i get wen all he can do is get u-mad
we never rly met,we juss click'd,ur special gurl u juss cant be pick'd
ur an angel juss have 2 spread thos wings,come wit me and 4get all thoze bad things


chorus*

its the truth i hate 2 tell
ur an angel livin in his hell
i come 2 rescue u from harms way
plz be mine.. no lie will come from wat i have 2 say

we can laugh bout this and joke-2,how can i mend my heard wen urs is broke-2
u come b4 me anytime day or night,u can come 2 me from ur relationships fight
we cant be one,but im done listen'n 2 this boy play wit ur emotions likes its fun
theres nothin i can do but be me, u talk 2 me and look 2..but gurl do u rlly see-me
4 ever tear u cry,cuz of him, its like demons juss tare my insides
ur the very thing that brightinz my smile, u kno im right stop fightin denile
yet i do not speak of us,how my world would crush if there was nothin between-us/
im i tear at keyin,u kno me and u fit..so wats there fear-of-bein/
hes makin somethin ur better then,u say men r all the same..well i aint like other men/
face 2 face wit u hard 2 brace my knees at the site at u, me and him have a race 2 race 4 u
nothin will stop me this time, i wont take u, theres better wayz 2 make u mine/
i dont feel this way all the-time,if my eyes u and luv only way i find time 2 rhyme/
cursed i am, but u make me feel good..and 4 u hot damn/
seriously the truth is u luv him yes,but wats he good 4 leavin u a mess/
how many weekends must i hear, ya he called me and piss'd me of,and i heard the hurt clear/
it hurts 2 write this wit fear of doin wrong,ur the truth in my life and this song/
dont kno how i could replace-him,but i do kno that is sad u cry evertime u face-him/
4get it..do wat ur heart revieles,u'll no ur right by how ur hearts feels/

chorus*

truth is certain and never wrong/
i probably hame hurtin somebody in this song/
im sry and i promise its 4 ur the best/
he can mess ur life, me ill take the love and all the rest/

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But this was alright i thought....structure threw me off at first till i caught on to it...flow in this was alright, it could have been better i think though....you had some ok multies, try to use some more of those...your vocab was alright, could be up'd though...but keep at it.

as a whole this was ok.....slightly diffferent scheme to some of your stuff i think...knocked the flow a bit...n the vocab was pretty limited...but i liked the concept....and the complexity was nice in places....pZ