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Latin Knockout Vs Youngallstar
alright.. the rules are:
15 lines max no Dick riding no crew voting no feeding 3-0 is a Knockout you wanna spit first ? |
Checkin In
Verses Due By 10:45 Its Now 10:08 .................................................. ........... |
checking in.......
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.. I'll {Dart-Rooms} To {Spark-Fumes} Like *Tragedies In Markets* Your Bound For {Cart-Doom} .. This {Shark-Glooms} And I {Park-Tombs} Your *Points Are More Unclear* Then Bad {Political-Cartoons} ..
.. Leave You {Prayin-For-Fame} Im {Slayin-Ya-Game} Keep K' *Waiting For His Time To Shine* But His {Day-Never-Came} .. You'll {Pay-The-Lame} Im Sure To {Decay-Your-Reign} .. Cus The Only Time Your *Speech Is Important* Is When You {Sayin-My-Name} .. .. Young' Will Make You {Settle-Docks} Cus I {Pedal-Box} And You'll *Never Be Harder* Like {Pebble-Rocks} .. My Words {Kettle-Drops} Ima {Set-Ill-Props} Im Sure Not To *Face De-Feat* Like A Pair Of Fuckin {Metal-Socks} .. |
check it
My Verses are like guns they blast-back , niggas clutchin-stomachs and bloody-Contacts/ they deliver head-aches, like the enemy-of-the-state , so advanced he couldn't even coordinate/ the spittin' time is due at eleven forty-Five/ this man's fruity, he's nicknamed Five-alive/ nigga wants to battle me, wats-da-cause?/ i'm like Santa-Clause, i came to deliva ya first loss/ the shit he delivers is probably already-writtin, Stop-spittin/ his shit is weak like a purring-baby-kitten/ i met dis chick last week her name was Bridgette/ she was-a-Midget, i saw dis man at a club askin for her-Digits/ my shit ignites like-Gasoline, spreading like wild-fires/ i'm chillin in da club sippin Thorisine, sorry kid they don't have rappers-for-hire/ son i rock everything-you-lack, timbs, monolos, even blue-khaks/ Dis man's black-and-sweaty, hanging over like my nut-sack/ ima be a rap star wit money drivin-Cadillacs, i'll see you at mcdonalds when i order my big mac/ |
Uppin For Votes Now
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structure=Latin Knockout
flow=tie punchlines=Latin Knockout personals=none enjoyment=tie vote=Latin knockout young all star your straight jus work on your structure because people might not vote for you because of your unorganized junky fomat. |
uppin 4 votes...
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opener: yung
closer: tie punches: latin structure: tie vocab: tie wordplay: tie overall: latin knock out |
uppin 4 votes..... vote plz.... THNX
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young is dqd for having to many open battles.. . . . . . .. . .. read & follow the rules %%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%% %%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%
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