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VirtuoSIC 12-23-03 02:46 PM

Namwob69 vs Virtuosic
 
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ghead n drop.

Namwob_69 12-23-03 03:46 PM

im in!

here you go i leave you bleed'n on the D Block
you could'n take this lyrical feed... it hit you like a buck shot
bitch you followed the wrong path to success
im lay you down to rest bitch your blessed
wit the holy spirit leave'n your chest! should of whore you vest
never know when you gonna be stupid... cuz i leave you stressed
bitch this levels to high for you your not ready to fly head back to mamas nest to digest this contest!
there is no contest they should hand me the award now
even if you manage to pull out a win it comes wit click click click
followed by a blow blow blow put me 6 feet under is the only way you gonna win
im the king pin so assume the possition so you can take one on the chin! Fill out these here papers to your next to kin
im under you skin im like a disease
that would make you dead grandma weak in the knees
please, dont make me write any more you done your tore
your a 2 cent whore that doesnt get paid let alone laid
you just got blown away by a lyrical grenade!

Im done im tired hit me up wit a pm when you post! peace im out!

VirtuoSIC 12-23-03 08:35 PM

bout time u fuckin posted

1st off ya flow couldnt be "fresh" if u gargled listerine/
and u couldnt spit "De-Cent" if ya mouth was a "Change Machine"/
im a win this battle with ease this shit like Cassidy and Jadakiss vs Alicia Keys/
even if this nigga was a locksmith he couldnt find the "key" to rippin mcs/
use the gauge to blow ya spine from ya
body so u gotta better chance "BACKIN OFF"/
U being ill is just a myth like gettin "hairy palms from jackin off"/
cock back the tek and ur dead/
if i put my dick to your face we still couldnt be "head to head"/
ja rule ass nigga not really a thug just claimin/
us 1 on 1 this kid "has it bad" like usher raymond/
u throw ur weak punches and they "streched far" like football punts/
i'll put pumps to ya gut like lil kim when she consumed them ounces of nut/
ya style useless claimin u got guns but dont toat em/
this faggot more attatched to dicks than "scrotums"/
i treat this cat like a "run on sentence" leave nothin but "Fragments"/
my style like cancer cant fight my "deadly habits"/

VirtuoSIC 12-24-03 12:34 AM

vote on this ish............................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ......

VirtuoSIC 12-24-03 10:23 PM

VOTE GOD DAMN IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!............................................ .................................................. .................................................. .....................................

Namwob_69 12-28-03 11:55 PM

Damn dog you got some mad skill mad props to ya VirtuoSIC! hey lets get some votes! ------------------------------------Votes---------------------------------------

Namwob_69 12-29-03 01:05 AM

uppin niggas lets see some votes god damn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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It 12-29-03 01:13 AM

weak structure...fix your format...
flow...virt...
style...virt...
wordplay...virt...
punches...tie...for now...
person...virt...
open...virt...
close...virt...
just come more creative...nam
vote...virt...
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Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote.
-Cprogress

Namwob_69 12-29-03 01:16 AM

upp'n need more votes its 1-0 virt

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Namwob_69 12-29-03 03:52 AM

uppin for votes!

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Namwob_69 12-30-03 03:39 AM

uppin for votes its 1-0 virt!

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Namwob_69 01-02-04 01:53 AM

come on dont be sleep'n on me now lets get some damn votes!!!!
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VirtuoSIC 01-04-04 11:09 PM

VOTE DAMN IT
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Namwob_69 01-05-04 02:31 AM

no shit no one votes on this damn site its like impossible to get a god damn vote up in here! Fuck!

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roamn 01-05-04 02:58 AM

I'ma go with Vsic on this one, en here's some quoteables with reasons why (didn't quote other guy, imo it was weak as hell).

1st off ya flow couldnt be "fresh" if u gargled listerine/
and u couldnt spit "De-Cent" if ya mouth was a "Change Machine"/
I like this.. the mouthwash line is classic, en it moved well into the second line, which hit harder the second time reading through..

cock back the tek and ur dead/
if i put my dick to your face we still couldnt be "head to head"/
This was aite, slightly played

ja rule ass nigga not really a thug just claimin/
us 1 on 1 this kid "has it bad" like usher raymond/
Hahah nice punch, comin' nice with it

i treat this cat like a "run on sentence" leave nothin but "Fragments"/
my style like cancer cant fight my "deadly habits"/
Nice but coulda closed better

Flow/Sims/Mets/Wordplay won it for VirtuoSIC


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