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PennyWise Vs Alias
i set up
you spit first 10 lines usual rules no d/r etc etc |
Due In An Hour
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i didnt say a time limit but i will drop as soon as i can............................................... ...........................................
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style outdated, cant grasp moderness, like peeps wearin sandals,
get a 'grip', you couldnt 'hold' me back if i was born with 'handles', im aint a 'psychic', but theres no need to foretell your 'wackness', yous never gonna get the fire, cos u've jus started losin 'matches', hate to deal with loose change, but 'penny's aint 'wise' battlin me, why do herbs find my range, an step forwards for thier first defeat you must not be in your proper mind by tryin to drop a ill rhyme, becoz the hot lines in ya verses equal the same as a dollar sign's, stand down, you couldnt elevate, if u was jury, risin in court rooms well, i never expected, to type so quick, an merk pennywise so soon, |
Denying-Ya-Fame, I'm Rhymin'-Wit-Lames, Ya Skill Equalz 0 Like Capitalizes-In-Ya-Name
Ya Behind-In-Da-Game, Blinded-By-Pain, Ya Like Pics Of Gay Sex, U Like Gayz-In-Ya-Frame My Fists Fold-In-Ya-Cheek, Like Photo's Of Anerexics Alias Just Showin-He's-Weak Ya Flows-Ain't-Unique, I'll B Wise N Show U Ya Biggest Mistake By Exposing-This-Link Spit Heat-Verbs, Along Wit Deep-Wordz.. But Like Atanta Teams Alias Is A Weak-Bird Don't Seek-Wordz, I'll Defeat-Nerdz, Ur A Herb!! Like Faults In Tennis You'll Get Served Wise Known To Jack-Dudes, This Battles Far From Opinions Cuz Its A Fact-You'll-Lose Snap Ya Back-In-Two Cuz Alias Is Prone To Suck More Then Daily Used Vacuum-Tubes Smash Faggots-Wit-Ease, My Punches Will Scar Ya Mind Wit A Traumatic-Disease Once The Matic-Is-Squeezed, I'll Have Ya Thinkin U Out Of Breath Like Asthmatic-Beliefs |
Uppin For Votes.. Nice Verse Alias
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aiight that link you has provided,
is 1- spamming 2- biting .................................................. ....... so maybe you will be banned???? |
Opener: Alias
Structure: Alias Punches: Alias Personals: Penny Flow: Close but Alias Closer: Penny (Alias overplayed mixed closer) Overall: Close battle but Alias takes this with what I think better punches... |
aiight well...........................uppin.............. ...drop a fair vote.........an a link.........................
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ok i dont have 100 posts but i gotta say vote:alias
better flow better puches jus all round better I know your vote didn't count because you can't poll yet, but if you did vote, it would have been disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote. -Cprogress |
ok look here's the deal......
you don't bold your whole battle or any of it for that matter...it get's really stupid and makes people not even want to read it- wit that said...... penny wise u tore the multi's up....but thats it...other wise ur verse lacked punches flo-meti's and structure for that matter....the style is wak...kill-the-dashes-all-over-the-place... overall....alias came in witta better battle verse along with alot funnier an wittier wordplay and stronger vocab...his structure was much better and flo on key.....overall he murked this kid- my vote- alias......penny learn and elevate....view other battles |
[quote]Opener: Alias
Structure: Alias Punches: Alias Personals: Penny Flow: Close but Alias Closer: Penny (Alias overplayed mixed closer) Overall: Close battle but Alias takes this with what I think better punches...[quote] sonned.... teh closer was a lil played an alaias came harder |
battle was aightish
alias..who are you?? jus wonderin penny had right idea but dint deliver BREAKDOWN punches-a flow-a Structure-a enjoyment-both multis-Penny sustainment-A complexity-p wordplay-a overall-Alias MAKE SURE YA HIT THIS UP PLZ...BEING SLEPT ON PZ http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1 |
YEP PEEP THE LINK PLZ ONE OF YA'LL..........................
NEED THIS TO BE LOOKED AT http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1 |
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