MeNTiLL vs B.I.Detained
 

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Due Friday or Saturday
Reg. Rules apply

Check in ... And ... Good Luck ... Peace

lol....checkin in on xmas day ...
oh well
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Did U disregard this battle ? LoL ... If not reply to this and let me know and I'll drop sumthin' cuz I don't wanna drop for nuthin' ... Peace

hello
i thought you did
as soon as ya see this
start keyin up
then i'll drop coz i know ya sawit pz
lol
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Aight ...

Damn dog U didn't drop, So ordinarily I was wonderin'
"I-I-I-I-I" ... Yo wat U tryin' to say? Stop stutterin' ... LoL
Dudes obsessed w/ text, Not cuz it's a hobby but cuz he can't bring the mic
Or maybe it's cuz he's "Content w/ the shitty things in life"
Bring a knife when tryna cut me wit ur bars, U ain't B.ein' I.
Nigga couldn't spit balls, So his dumbass took Peas An Try'd
On ur knees 2 cry? Why I bet U thought U had this frey on lock
This niggas swingin', Hittin' the same amount that Pedro Nok'd
This is how I stay on top ... U the rap Popeye wit no spinach
I woulda thought of sumthin' to go wit ^that -
Till I figured I didn't need nemore punches to win it

Blah ... It's too early in the mornin' ... LoL ... There U go ... Peace

Dog ... U were juss online ... Wat U go do prewrite ? Damn .. Juss drop ur verse .. Peace ... Yadda yadda yadda yadda ... done

fukin hell chill..i was at college jus browsin but now am home
*keyin*

Admits his Intelligence is made Artificially..& says it in his mind
...but jus not Officially
coz Mentills too fukin Weak to make Statements Individually
he's a Deficiency..part of A.I..& wud Fail at the Box Office Too
not b/coz of the Crew..see I Ment-Ill's too far for You...
I acknowledge you Had Skillz..<<Notice I refered to Past Tense
coz now you've fell off the Fence..so hard...
.............................a damn Picket Penetrated ya Defence..ouch
ya make No Sense..

.............................you called out..yet it ya took Decades to Spit
Oh!! jus makin sure i Showed up for ya Pre-Written shit??
has Hit a Bottomless Pit..just like Throwin a Penny to a Well
ya punches are Just Wishes that couldnt Carry Heat from Hell

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Votes ? ? ? ? ? ? Can we get some votes ? ? ? ? ? ? Stop sleepin' on this battle ! ! ! ! ! Still not long enuff .. .. .. .. .. Good

I think Mentill had a better verse. Neither one were impressive, it's just that Mentill had harder hittin disses. B.I. is almost open mic'm makin statements or something. BOTH of you spit better against me. Don't play down for your competition... even though that makes me look like a hypocrit *cough* Av *cough*

vote - mentill

v/ Mentil
neither really impressed...b.i u need to improve ur structure....it hurts ur flow and punches...cuz ur wording is off

mentill u had some good spots but u need to stay consistent...u won with better punches

V/ Mentill

B.I you need a better approach to your verses
i can see what your trying to do, but it isnt workin to well
Flow was off...and ineefective punches
Mentill came nice...some nasty patches..
but overall on point...

Pz.

3-0 KO ... can one of the mod's close this ? Or does it need 5 votes ?

Alright...i check this battle out and honestly Mentill just had the better verse....He came harder on his punches and basically it just seemed like he has more experience with writing a good FULL text battle....B.I...your verse was good you had some nice personals but nothing that hit me as being to much of truth...i mean the whole come back thing....anyways...

vote=mentill

V/ mentill.

Both came weak for their standards. But Mentill came a little bit better, harder punches, better flow. Everything that wins battles.