PoiSoN-PeN vs. GambinO
 

10-16 lines deadline by tomorow midnight pal but i sujjest u do it today lol

aight aight let me kick it

Yo, u call yoself Gambino but u aint no mob boss/
Shoulda called yo self Jesus, Im crucifying you on the cross/
I know we tight but I gotta put yo ass in place/
Like Maddonas leather clothes in the 80's,Im leavin u fully laced/
Hide yo face,youre a waste of space on this site/
Think u turn on hoes but yo ugly ass couldnt turn on a light/
All u gays call gambino if u wanna get,eaten and fucked/
Fuckin a vaccum is the only time u get yo dick sucked/
Im frying and servin this bitch like McDonalds does cattle/
U must have a fetsih for gettin shit on,or else why would u enter this battle/

not the best but i have a feelin u wont top it lol

cmon man replay allready shit its not like my verse was that good so that u need 2 years to come up wit a response olol...............................seriosly tho hurry the fuck up

yo i aint got a lot of time so im gon end this quick/
ill call u ja rule cuz u on everyones dick/
dont make me ride on u and yo sick chick/
my gun busts rounds yos only goes click/
my rymes is like greenday, turn yo mind to brainstew/
yeah theyll stomp yo pride like they was wearin a shoe/
im outta control lyrically on the loose/
you on the back of da rap train yo new name is caboose

that was a wack battle but ur both newbies so i didnt expect much......both need mad elevation......poison was wack but gambino was wacker......
AND THA BREAKDOWN
opener-neither
closer-poison
flow-gambino
creativity- neither
punches- poison
enjoyment- none at all
vote- poison
MAD ELAVATION NEEDED BY BOTH

nice record u got there............................................. ..............................lol

still good enought o beat ur ass............................................... .................................................. ...

Lol -PoiSoN-PeN- the bust on minis was better than the battle

lmao.............................................. ...............

flow-gamino
punches-poison
personals-poison
consistancy-poison

both came iight, poison had the better disses.. his closer sealed the vote.. pretty creative.. gambino was iight with the ja rule line, didnt seem like he tried too much, but anyhow this was a kool battle.. poison just came a bit wittier and more hurtful with the punches.. return the fav on one of my battles??? holla