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Deacon vs 13th disciple
1-2 min max
no dr'n no crew honest votes......please.... due dec 30th |
lol.......good luck kid..................
in... 100 characters........................... ..................... :::::::::::::::::: |
here it is, i cant believe you didnt post yours................heres mine on time biatch, your about to be served...........
good luck : http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/macktheknifemusic.htm |
i'm gonna ignore the fact u put a hook in a battle verse..
anyways... here u go dukes.... http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/nicknamemusic.htm |
Deacon.....lmao at hummer...nice beat not battle though...nice punches good personals lmao at your still a mini me...overal this was cool good quality
13th disciple...flow is kinda off...voice overs distort it kinda...punches nice...personals good...lmao at viagra ...6th sense line was dope... overal- i think deacon won...this is my first vote on an audio though so forgive me if i voted all wack |
Ok let me break it down. I'll break deacon's first and then come back in about 30 and hit 13th's then vote seeing as how I'm veeerrryy busy.
But anyways.. Deacon- Beat is.. ehhh. I dunno I realize it's for humor but thus far the parody isn't even funny. Alright verse has kicked in. Flow is decent. Punches are blah. Very few and far between. And weak. No offense that's just the part of the verse you needta work on. Ahh.. fell off beat a few times. Rushed some lines to fit. This wasn't a very good verse man. Sorry. I realized you went for the humor impact. But for the humor to work it has to be good ya know ? 2.5/5 <-- Rating for the audio 13th- *I'll get to this in about 30* Vote- *Read the above lol* |
ok here it is...
13th won... why...sounded better thats why... flow/13th vocals/13th beet/13th wordplay/draw punches/draw personals/draw yo...13th approach was more intense... good lyrics deacon but i wasnt feeling your beet... overall 13th wins because his verse was more of a battle verse... deacon beet was the main reason i didnt vote for him... other than that good battle... both were pretty good... vote/13th diciple... peace... |
This was hilarious.
Deacon: You put a hook in a battle, That was hilarious. Your personals were dope and your flow actually wasn't as bad as I thought it would be lol. Your beat was like somethin from Smash Mouth...More Entertaining. Good Job Dawg. 13th: Listening To Your Audio Is Like Swallowing Needles. Your Flow Is Horrible. It's Like The Whack Version Of Outkast. Personals were there...but wasn't feeling it. Vote: Deacon. |
Aight am I allowed to vote? I dunno I have under 500 posts but if I can holla and I'll give a breakdown.
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this was a good battle i thought..
Deacon: lol you had a funny diss, it had me laughing....the beat was ok for what you were going for i thought...you had some good punches and good personals i thought....your flow was good. 13th: your diss was good as well....flow fell off at points i thought....you had good punches and personals as well. But i think Deacon took this one with the better verse, props to both though. |
ok heres my breakdown
flow was definitely to deacon and also the humor somewhat the beat was for 13th i felt thaty deacons wack beat wasnt pleasant listenin to at all quality was to deacon whatz wit the hummer and the chorus:) it was decent i felt that punches were siding 13th that pee wee herman line was tight and the making the band one as well lyrics i thought sided wit 13th and personals deacon did get on 13th crew but it wasnt enuff props n effect to the verse was to 13th vote-13th good shit from u both though hit this one up wit an honest vote http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...701#post1038701 |
HAHA.. Decon very creative verse, great quality..
I laughed my ass of on that buy be a hummer part. anyways you won this battle in my opinion you came pretty solide.. as for 13th you did fine just i wasnt really feelin it all that much, i though you would of came harder but oohh well.. Overall-Decon Peace |
deacon.................i like your flow...........wasnt off.........
13 flow was kinda off at times but you had more punches and better ones............. vote 13................. ps deacon use more punches and dont put a hook in a battle....... |
LoL...Damn...
Dope battle... Pretty dope spits From both ...... Deacon's shit was off tha hook... Good personals Hard hittin punches... Overall.......17/20 13th Straight..Verse Punches didn't seem to be that great Good flow... Nice sound...... Overall....15/20 Vote-Deacon... I was really feelin his shit more But it was a dope battle overall. Props to both...Ya'll both came hard Just......Deacon Edged it.... |
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