for ghetto poet..
 

giime a sec here and i'll drop it for ya there...
replied to worth...
2hot2handle...and ...Ape..

I'm known for my metas vocab and quick tongue..
flow no ones betta iQ's amazun...
Punches i try not to throw em cause kids be fuckin stupid..
Mics i was born to blow em don't believe me check the blueprint..
Turn the bass up the treble you'll find no ones on my level..
in your style no point to revel cause i 'll bury ya like a shovel..
You crept to the mIc i got heat censored vison so come..
scanned this fool over once and knew the battles outcome..
They call me the UnderRated cause ispit poetic hectic lines..
think you wanna battle me but i don't fuck with pathetic minds..
Uncomprehending signals not sending ryhmes mind bending..
the beggining and the ending the healing and the mending..
In this rap i got fame i'm out for MC recognition...
take my name with a mission of flippin pre-disposition..
Record deal missin cause the execs won't even listen..
nothing to do with howi'm spittin more the color of my skin..
which is Bs so i get vexed and straight release stress..
your overworked underpayed and highly oversexed..
cause recognize i split thigh and indeed fuck the best..
MC's silence battle crys cause they know my shits blessed..

for my man ghetto poet..

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..I don't know why..but..I enjoyed this piece..I thought it was well written..your content was good..your flow was there..nice work..

Yeah this was good i thought....your structure in this was pretty good...you had some good vocab in this....flow in this was good, it stayed on through out the piece i thought...overall this was a good piece...enjoyed the read....keep at it.

kool uppin for more feedback.......................................... ................................

Obviously topic wise kinda dissapointing.
Oh well, on with the piece..
The vocabulairy, structure where there..
Thats a good start, but first n for most..
This was a very creative piece i did not stumble upon any played lines or concepts.
Some witty,catchy lines..for what it was it was nice.
A enjoyable read.

Great drop yo. I personally thought everything was perfect. I can't really say anything is wrong since I'm not da master, but from a newbie's view...... keep up

good drop had good concept made sense keep ya head up

-chuuch

Your beginning was strong, nice multis....
like you said no punches.... got weaker towards the end
nice though