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Doctor Ill 12-24-03 09:35 AM

10 min keystyle
 
Rap veteran slammin' ya wit' grammar ha
Ya couldn't manage to damage an amature
Lyrics stabbin' ya leave u dead or a cabbage
Wit ya rep on life support an' pride bandaged
Ur shit's sloppy like a packaged sandwich
Does the job but rough like a crashed landin'
Last man standin' I'm always the winner
Kill ya one on one an' eat four ways for dinner
But this is bravado I'm skirtin' the issue
Bruisin' u up jus' hurtin' the tissue
Make ya skin raw each punch cuttin' in more
Go for the knockout when everythin's sore
Ribs broken split lips ur head's spinnin'
U'll be more concerned wit' livin' than winnin'
Organs failin' now sights fadin'
Final punch ya temples cave in

menolin 12-24-03 10:03 AM

you need to reply to 3 open mics, and then post the links!!!

Edicius 12-24-03 10:19 AM

^He's not kidding, ..follow the rules else i will close this.

Doctor Ill 12-24-03 10:38 AM

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...753#post1013753

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...774#post1013774

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...782#post1013782

NePtUnE 12-24-03 10:43 AM

This was okay. Structure and vocab was good. Not a very interesting topic though. I got bored.

Dev 12-24-03 10:51 AM

not bad for a quick keystyle..... vocab was basic.... couple of ok multis....but the topic lacked though.....pZ

WORTH 12-24-03 02:47 PM

for 10 mins, that is pretty sad...


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