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In tha Streets Of UC...I Wuz Born,Wen through Puberty
Such a unity..Lianny Babygurl It'll always B Between u and Me
Sometimes I feel Speechless..Shit I Stutter on,Just to Explain
While Knowledge Crosses By Brain..Bein accused of so much Shit,Whos to Blame?
E'yo...

When thangs Turn Good..They transform to Bad..
Though Then Again Lookin at all...I accomplished,I'm Fuckin Glad
I take Pride In whateva Moves I Make...Luv's Sumtin In Me,Unable to Create
I Get So Pissed when I think Bout.My Relationships bein at Stakes
Spittin Nice,Tryin to achieve..Sum Momentum
I got Luv fo My best Friends...From tha Start since i Met Them
As i Sit Here Keyin This..Thoughts Run through My Mind,Knowin ya Gon' b Readin This
I get so Emotional..Comin from a tru kid Sum How I'm Feelin This
Deliberatin All this hatin...Facin Tha Consequences,I'm Delt Wit
I'ma Tru Gangsta..I'm Just to Heartful,to Go out and Sell Shit
Tha Words I Speak..Neva Lie,Especially in a Postion,where my heart feels weak..
Gurl So beautiful and Petite..Gorgeous Enuff,To make Me think bout her in my Sleep
From When I first Started This..THeres Sutmin I had To Accomplish..
Get a Gurl,Rap,Grow up to b a Good Man..Now everythins Astonished..

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this was a pretty good piece, should have more replies. .
the flow from one line to another was good, and by flow i do not mean how well it rhymed, i mean how well one sentence connected with the previous. nice overall job here.

Whats Good Kid....Thanks Dawg...No doubt....Fuckin Sleepers Hommie...Same Shit on Every Site...Just gots To B Patient...Just hope it don;'t get to....lol....1ne