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Tolerant Level 12-25-03 03:04 AM

yte grl vs Tolerant Level
 
10-15 bars
1 hr to drop
no hate dr crew votes:nono:
3 votes win

Tolerant Level 12-25-03 03:32 AM

yte grl u trying to bring ~Genetic Flows~ i punch u in that sluty mouth and ur ~Infected Hoes~ u couldnt bring heat if u had ~Kenetic Blows~//
i make u a dead mummy that couldnt make ~Beats with Brains~ or either u could rhymes cause u ~Defeat in Fame~ cause u a ~creap in Drains~//
if u tried to even front i will do ~Knockout Hits~ when u fell ur body ~Fellout in Bits~ and u have no ~Commiting Purgery~ cause ur verse get fukted up like ur teeth in ~Dental Surgery~//
i come and throw punches at ur face from all ~Terminal Directions~ if u try to come hard ill spill ur blood in a ~Thermal Corection~ if a hobo saw u he would feel a ~Internal Erection~//
which u couldnt prevent cause u ~Transvestite Whore~ but ur on the net that will make u a ~Gigabyte Whore~ tellin them how the cyber rooms work like ur on a ~Mega site More~//
plz correct me if im wrong ur verse have no ~Common Destruction~ they are pre written but u loose any ways like a ~Phenomen of Seduction~//

Tolerant Level 12-25-03 03:40 AM

since u where just online now offline ill give u 24 hours to drop ur verse to make it fair dont wanna close the battle

so upin ur verse

yte grl 12-25-03 01:16 PM

whats this shit about my rhymes get fucked up like my teeth in surgery/ by who u couldnt make it rymin in a nursery/ima give u third degree burns to the face/ ur the 1 thats gonna need surgery lookin like a pile of human waste/ if u make it ur gonna fade faster than mase/i hope u realize ur wrong if u think ur winnin/ ur plastic hubcaps im chrome rims that keep spinnin/ u rhyme like ur 3 and ur how old/ what ur friends gonna say when u tell em u lost 2 a 14 yr old/like a steem roller my rhymes my rhymes will run u over/ u should go 2 na and get sober/ lay off the crack/ if u maybe ur rhymes wouldnt stink like crap/ so take some advice go home/ join the girl scouts so u could b with ur own/

Tolerant Level 12-25-03 11:38 PM

aiight uppin for mf votes ppl dont wanna wait a life time to see who won ....... o and no pussy ass 1 line votes either

Tolerant Level 12-27-03 09:42 AM

come on uppin for fukn votes its simple just have to say who won and why cant take that much of ur time so plz vote now

mc aines 12-27-03 01:20 PM

nice battle but tolerant level took this 1 on all acounts....not just because he was good but yte girl yo lyrics were played and old and ive heard the mase line plenty of times b4...........tolerant made an example of u......no need 4 me 2 breakdown tolerant gets my vote

A-DueCe-26mad3 12-29-03 10:24 AM

TL-nice spit, again u really didnt have personals, but u still came hard wit ur punches. Had some nice multis and shit in there. Overall u had a good battle.

YG-not really a good spit. It was very basic and not put 2gether well. Paragraph form is not a good way ta write battles. Look at TL's verse, he went line by line. Thats how to set it up. Ur punches were very hard hittin and at times played out. Overall u had a basic spit and need ta work on it and elevate. But im in a good mood right now lol so ill offer to help u elevate. Just cheCc my profile and get my shit or PM and ill help u out as much as i can.

VOTE:TOLERANT LEVEL

~1~

Tolerant Level 03-21-04 06:54 PM

Close this battle plz been here for too long and i got the 1 up vote so mods close battle

accomplishment 03-21-04 07:08 PM

TL takes this one his multis were kinda played but yte girl didnt have any multis at all so tl takes this one man RETURN DA FAVOR PLZ

Regulatorâ„¢ 03-22-04 12:28 AM

Vote: Tolerant Level

Took The Easliy.
Punches, Complexity, Flow All Go To Him.
Nice Verus Kid, You Still Need Some Work But U'LL Get There

Tolerant Level 04-04-04 09:01 AM

thanx for the votes ppl.... now mods cans use plz close this battle as i won 3 votes to 0

E Looch 05-01-04 09:30 PM

tl got this shti with hard ass punches not many personals but had plent punchs that landed hard nice drop i liked ya shit


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