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riddle_me_this 12-25-03 03:26 AM

first
 
This my first time doin this. I ussually just make the beats. so just tell me what yall think.

gangbangin,murderin and killin//
stuck a nigga to da cellin//
bloody body chillin//
can't fight da feelin//
im an M-TOWN villian//

iwas trained by schatti//
that nigga from da M-TOWN valley//
who b lightin the dro in the catti//
smell the aroma we start to rally//

smokin da potent//
heavily tokin//
relaxin and smokin//
we never b chokin//
4 ever b jokin//
laughin and lokin//
we never b mopin//
4 ever b floatin//

Mental God 12-25-03 06:24 AM

ummm ok here do this... go to the wackness emergency center

peep a few other open mics... come back and try again.

you will see the error of you ways...

Menik 12-25-03 04:55 PM

You need to leave 3 links or 3 names of people you left feedback to or this will get closed, Thanks.

riddle_me_this 12-26-03 12:49 AM

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...297#post1018297

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...335#post1018335

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...344#post1018344

riddle_me_this 12-26-03 12:51 AM

yea i know its a little crazy, but im goin to keep workin at it


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