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Hard Topic - ( White Christmas ) - 10 Lines
This Is My Try Out For Topical Leaugue
Alright , A White Christmas Is Something I Long For And I Enjoy/ Im Attracted To It More Than Mikeal Jackon Is To Lil Boys/ Its Such A Wonderful Sight , White And Oh So Very Bright/ Very Much Like The Northern Lights And Big Stars At Night/ Whiter Then White Paint And Very Clean Unused Napkins/ I Hate Getting Soakers But I Still Love When This Happens/ Living In the Right Place You See 1 Every 10 Years,Maybe/ Unless You Lived In Cold Antartica Since You were A Baby/ I Love To Witness It , Its So Excuisit ,I Just Have To Stare/ Its Like RapBattles Being Shut Down For Repair , Its Rare/ Peace |
leave yo 3 peepo, ok but short and i dont care about christmas!!!!
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dont u wont suceed in topic your shit has no feelin
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^^^stfu noob!!!
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Basic, simplistic still i did not dislike readin this.
Regardless if i agree with you or not, You did get ur message across..clearly. The Micheal line is obviously played out..Though.. I probably didnt have to point this out to you. As for the overall picture, it was ok..to short.. |
Ehhh. This is a tryout. Take is seriously. Give them yo best shit. I predicted you didn't spend more than an hour on this, try spending two or three, you will have a great audition.
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This was an ok Peace...
There was no real vocab, or multis... seemed like a novice writer....work on it patna |
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