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AlcaTrakz 12-25-03 08:58 PM

***Away in a Manger***
 
yeah, this is for the topical shit this week, so this was the best i could stretch "Away in a Manger" and make it sound good.

flipped it into isolation and shit like that.

Beat : me
Lyrics : me
Everything : me

Lo-Fizzle

Hizzle-Bizzle

Keep it on the DOWNLOAD....

.pz.

Crooked-Comical 12-25-03 09:13 PM

Nice Track


Man I Would Like to use Some Of your Beats There Sick

Get Back To Me

Peace

AlcaTrakz 12-25-03 09:35 PM

www.soundclick.com/alcatrakz

since no one copped the package deal, they are all $25

first come first serve

Swoop 12-25-03 11:03 PM

cheap bastards...........lmao @ at gettin shot.......i'm love that lil intro
nice beat......samples??

wooo....i see a lil change in ya flow.....im hearin some flippen....elevatin

wasn't on topic too much........i thought it was isolation....
but still on topic if you think about it.........

everythang was you.........so.........nice everythang

holla

AlcaTrakz 12-26-03 12:39 AM

that was the idea of the topic, how the no money life puts u into a state of isolation...

foo'

lol

um..samples?...tryin to think....nah, i played the melodies out

.pz.

AlcaTrakz 12-26-03 04:30 AM

ZZZZzzzzzzzz............

Straie 12-26-03 11:54 AM

nice beat........flow and lyrics nothing special........I guess I jus look for originality that stands out from the rest, but if you were trying to sound like everybody else on the east coast.........job well done.,lol........intro was coo......stay up

C-NiCe 12-26-03 01:33 PM

the beat was iight.....


lyrics is good.....i like the intro, but maybe you should add sum1 else in it....like me it a convo between two people you know...cuz gunshots pop off from the person you talkin to right?...so i was guessin u should add sum 1 there too.


this was a good for a 1:26 minute track....

verbal conflict 12-26-03 03:42 PM

nice beat, flow was dope... good voice.. nice quality... lyrics is tight... dope track..

AlcaTrakz 12-26-03 04:42 PM

i guess to some people concepts/topics dont matter.

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D-Dizzle 12-26-03 05:30 PM

I thought this was stright, your flow rode the beat pretty decent, I like the bongos in the beat, made the whole song song full, the only thing that brings it down is your delivery, it dosn;t really match the punch of the beat to me, decent shit though.......

Soul Theory 12-26-03 07:09 PM

i like that kermit the frog shit lol



you make that beat?

AlcaTrakz 12-27-03 02:45 AM

^yes, to THIS one that you was supposed to respond to..lol..and the kermit one...

idiot..

i love you though!

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AbstraX 12-27-03 06:21 AM

listenind as i reply


this beat is fuckin raw

feelin ya prersence and delivery

voice is sicc chorus is ill

like to hear dope shit and this was dope

i like ya style

hit me up for a collab sumtime


pz

abstrax00@aol.com

Efusive 12-27-03 08:00 AM

nice beats ya got there.. mine are still better :).. other wise nice track


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