split vs. Crooked-comical
 

10 lines/bars

due 30 minutes after check in
no crew
hate
dr
or any of that bullshit

now this battle is gonna be my deepest and darkest secret
i mean who wouldn't be ashamed at how easily he was defeated
when im spit my rhymes, i leave cats addicted like a cigarette
but his shits cheap, leave em feignin like a stick of nicarette
its the holidays, shouldn't you be out singing christmas carrols
cause raps a dirty game, and this cats style is pretty sterile
my lyrics ancient, been around as long as the globes been spinnin
but his shit was over just before "IN THE BEGINNING"
(little god voice, AHHM)
my raps have content, enough to breach this kids hull
his shits so empty, its got this whole thread reading null...

10 lines of pure venom, you gonna check in

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Sorry i had to clsoe up another battle first

ill keystyle right now man

be done very shortely

Peace

aight dont take too long lol, i spent maybe 10 minutes on that verse............................................. .........................................

Yo Tried To Keep Christmas Theme to It Cuz todays Christmas

Peace


That Is 10 Lines Of Pure Venom ??? , You Little Bitch your Fake/
Only Venom You Handle Is From Yur Boyfriends TROUSER SNAKE/
Cause You Dont Get Gurls , Your Dirty, Gross And Very Un Steril/
When It Comes To Gurls U Cant Even Get A Christmas"CARROL"/

^ CARROL Is A Gurls Name , Get It ? Anyways

I Am Destroying You Simplely , Its Nothing , Its As Easy As Pie/
This Whack Line Is Proven How Much I Am Actually Tryin To Try/
It Is Christmas , But I Aint Gunna Give You No Mercy , NO WAY/
I Would Give You This Win , But It Would Totaly Ruin My Holiday/
Skills You Very Much Lack, Ill Have You Kissen My Ass Crack . . .
So Much Itll Seem Like Theres Misseltoe Hangin Over My Back/

crooked comical, i bombin yo' ass with atomicals
have you reachin for your missletoe lookin very un-anatomical

bah lol, im not gonna go off, lol, good shit, good shit, dont just that line ^^, was bored lol

. very close shit.....COmical one thing i dont like is your mix of caps .. just makes shit an effort to read. And you did feed of his verse.... no hote .. my vote is Split.................. not by much.....

vote for me to people......

peace

didn't you battle comical? if you did, we can't accept this vote, wouldn't be fair,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Exactly .. And Thank You

fair enough............................................ .................................................. .................................................. ......i got nothing againsed comical i liek his shit...................... no hate........

Uppin # 1 ************************************************** **************************************************

its a good battle, dont need hate votes, i don't wouldn't want it on my record that i won or lost a battle because of hate

Uppin # 2 ************************************************** ************************************************** ***********************************

Open= CC
Close= CC
Floh= Tied
Personals= CC
Punches= CC
Overall= CC

Vote= CC

Explaination= Foreal read them again, and see who's was better...

Aight a nice battle boys. Hope you all had a good christmas. A decent battle nonetheless.
Laydown:
Opening:SplitSoul
Punches:SplitSoul
Personals:SplitSoul
Multis:Tied
Metaphors:CrookedComical
Vocabulary:SplitSoul
Enjoyability:CrookedComical
Closing:CrookedComical
Overall:SplitSoul

Vote:SplitSoul nice job. Merry christmas bois.

I would appreciate if you voted on this battle. Thanx.
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