Joker VS Ill-Fresh
 

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no crew hate or d/r votes...
votes must be explained...
ill drop first you set it up...

check...
i'll drop soon
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ight check it...

i rhyme tight-and-then-laugh, your rhymez drive-and-then-crash...
dont accept this battle next time, cause this fight-will-never-last...

this kids 'rhymez are his jokes' so there is no way he could choke...
if he gets paid from droppin his rhymez, there is no way he is broke...(a comedian)

we are both fairly new to the game and new to this site...
but there is a difference, cause me liking girls dont make me a dyke...

not even goin read after he drops cause i know what the results-are...
his punches are like a map the way he needs a key to explain where his insults-are...

this kids balls-havent-dropped, his verse did fall-and-then-stopped...
his rhymez circumsized like his dick, already small-and-then-cropped...

i believe the words are...pimp slapped

check 1 check 2 i'm bout to rip you//
hurry an spit so i can deny u win # 2//

..i'll drop afta u

-chuuch

i'll drop in 20 mins
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After the battle you be like "mary j" wanting "no more drama”//
this is ur last battle and you aint "going out with a bang" if u was a "suicide bomber”//
my shits constantly flow..yo words is similiar to sticks "hanging stiff//
when its over just to leave u in 'vein'..i use ya hommies "artiries" to "hang you with”//
I made a call-out and this cat answer it so It aint my fought to KO this nigga it was his choice//
This may hoight(hurt), Cuz Ya presence on this site is “fading away” quicker then “macy-gray's voice”//
You wanted to battle me faggot? That’s cool, you’re just headed straight for a kill//
You wanna wipe your ass with my verse? do it, maybe it’ll finally ‘make your shit ill//
My verse too good for ya, so stop reading, you might die if ya see more//
Shit, you’re so fucking wack I could beat you with just the right side of the key board//

Pretty Evenly matched... I'm gonna take Ill Fresh by a hair.... a very thin hair....

I know it's unofficial.... but both of y'all were good just felt Fresh a little more (very little).

Keep up the good shit.
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dogg can u break that down dawg cause he didnt win

Plz use this to vote
punches:
flow:
disses:
metas:
Punches:
Wordplay:
OVERALL:

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Punches: Joker
Personals: Joker
Flow: joker
wordplay:both ( weak)
structure: tie

over all: Joker

vote on this.....http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101455

uppin 4 votes
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punches:joker
flow:ill
disses:joker
metas:ill
Personals...joker
Wordplay:joker
OVERALL:joker.....one


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punches- joke
wordplay- ill
flo- joke
structure- ill
meti4- ill
multi- joke
overall- joke......close...good newbies...joke edges in better categories

Uppin 4 votes (2)
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