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Asesino by Rhytmic
Fitness by Buzzkill
Transition to Greed by Deva

Chorus
If I cant survive the night then who would be there to revive my sight/
If I cant uphold my life, Then whos goin to be there to take my knife/
If suicidal tendencies fulfill my thoughts within my brain, Then how can the voices in my head agree if I'm insane/
If I'm caught sweatin and screamin in my bed, Will you be there to stop the cardiac arrest before I end up dead/
Who's there?
Who's talkin?
Who cares?
I'm walkin.......

I'm livin my life standin by death, Likes hes a twin on my side outside cause I can feel his breath, My first step as a child was consequenced by the messiah, Controversial continuations on my path noted by my pariah, Lyrical attire inherited as each earth year passed, Contested events beginning but the outcame was last, Sporadic thoughts infused my equilibrium Like why dont people like Skillz No one was feelin em, Was it race or my skin color attatched, That would cause hatred or displeasure by the way they'd react, Life's not simple for a minority in rap, Its like the 1800's when the slaves were used like crap, I'm no feces or shit of the earth, The lord has a reason he developed my birth,
When the sperm integrated with the egg of my mother, It was jus the blueprint of a mortal who's gift was to teach others,
But do you care if I'm here speakin of what I think, Or am I jus a statistic that should be extinct.....

Chorus
If I cant survive the night then who would be there to revive my sight/
If I cant uphold my life, Then whos goin to be there to take my knife/
If suicidal tendencies fulfill my thoughts within my brain, Then how can the voices in my head agree if I'm insane/
If I'm caught sweatin and screamin in my bed, Will you be there to stop the cardiac arrest before I end up dead/
Who's there?
Who's talkin?
Who cares?
I'm walkin.......

If I'm walkin then I'm takin the low road direct, Cause it's going to take a miracle for what im sayin to take effect, You witness the discovery of the words you wish to write, But it'll take added effort to present them to excite, Insight included never diluted cant take the full force then you'll be secluded, I dont know where the end of the road is but I'm sure to find it, However during the process I'll make sure Im lyrically minded, For lyrics are my only escape from my troubles in my mind, Cause my life itself is a mystery no one can define...In time I shall see what lies before me, Cause theres no ill fated luck or justice within my destiny..Death is near you will not here me cry, Dont be depressed one day we all....... Die

Chorus
If I cant survive the night then who would be there to revive my sight/
If I cant uphold my life, Then whos goin to be there to take my knife/
If suicidal tendencies fulfill my thoughts within my brain, Then how can the voices in my head agree if I'm insane/
If I'm caught sweatin and screamin in my bed, Will you be there to stop the cardiac arrest before I end up dead/
Who's there?
Who's talkin?
Who cares?
I'm walkin.......

In life there is nothing you should expect, Cause life is nothing but a ZERO EFFECT

uppin this

You ain't got nothing on Peanut Heaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad!!!!!!


Bag of skills
I think you're better off a bag of pills
Your giving me a headache with your homosexual thrills
AIDS kills, so you best watch out
And get that dick up out of your mouth

Muhfucka!

SHOUTS OUT TO MISTAH EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!! HA!!!!!!!

The Rapsss bishes.

Stop replying to topics..this isnt a battle board save it for the front lines

still uppin this piece

I thought it was okay. Flow was off, work on structure. And it was simple. Not all of the rhymes made sense.

didn't really enjoy it but i was ok.....ya Structure need work man...but ya flow was nice was straight on Most of the way though Nice work...Ya ocab Multis and wordplay Lacked but were there....so all and all nice Man keep elevaten Peace Out Man