lyrical-jesus vs yte grl
aight spit
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like i said u can spit anytime u want from now till midnight
and since feeding off my verse is against the rules, its useless to see what i wrote first the deadline is tonight at midnight so spit when wenever u want |
LyRiCaL-JeZuS... the God of this hip-hop shit/
But I stopped belivin in myself ...the day U started to spit/ Mach 3 is the speed...at which this bitch meet the concrete/ How can I be beat...by an MC who pees sitting down on the toilet seat/ My lyrical knockin,have u rockin bandaids ...24-7 like Nelly/ U couldnt get all eyes on you... if you ressurected Makaveli/ I cant count the amount of ways ..I ruled this bout/ Dont look for Yte Girl after this...cause she gon make a brand new accont/ U must puff crack...thinkin u can bust raps and step-to-me/ The only future u have in music .....is selling my albums at HMV! (merkin complete) |
shit hurry the fuck up lets get this shit rollin............................................ ......................
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101455 |
i dont need to feed off of ur gay ass rhymes/next time ill go first so u can feed off mine/ u need to cause u dont even have one good punchline/ my rhmes r uniqe like most u rap the same/ ur like the beastie boys u dont belong in the game/ u guys should do a remix of insane in the membrane/whats sad is im winnin and i aint even tryin/ like 50 im gonna get rich but u gonna die tryin/ hes fixin to b cryin/ by the time im through/ im anthrax ur the fuckin flu/fuck it im through / im done/ i had a good time i hope u had fun
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sorry yte girl but this kid is craaaaaazyyyyyy Lyrical Jesus nice flow man u totally bombed on this chick saying shes makin a new account and shit HA! Kept it simple, that was great yo, u wanna battle? As for girl you need to learn to oraganize ur shit and not say 3 rhyming lines, music goes in even numbers, 2-4-6-8 if u knew anything about music u would know what I mean good battle ------------------
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nice battle, but lyrical took it. i cant vote yet, but lyrical, it was good. keep em comin ///////////
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I'd say Lyrical cos he had a better layout, more original verses, Rhymin was all done cool.
Lyrical is my vote. |
multis=lj
punches=lj structure=lj creativity=lj flo=lj overall-lj lj you merked her bitch ass...keep it up dog..... |
Aight check this out Lyrical Jesus smoked this girl badly the nigga is fuckin nuts though I mean hey I said Lyrical Jesus bites chino but shit that nigga still got skill
Open; Lyrical wins LyRiCaL-JeZuS... the God of this hip-hop shit/ But I stopped belivin in myself ...the day U started to spit/ Dope shit kid Punches: Lyrical wins My lyrical knockin,have u rockin bandaids ...24-7 like Nelly/ U couldnt get all eyes on you... if you ressurected Makaveli/ Damn nigga to much Chino dog this shit is hot Metaphors: Lyrical Wins That nelly is an example of a perfect metaphor Flow: Lyrical Structure: Lyrical By A landsly Lyrical destories this girl nasty style I she aint bad but damn Lyrical killed her. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104765 vote on this one both of y'all |
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