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the struggle hit this up
young mike livin the struggle//
smokin weed,skippin school got me in trouble// probation extended rapsheet dubled and tripled// you dont know what its like to beat a man that cripled// just to get a little change a little money// this shit real aint nothin funny// so i went to the store// i was equiped with the fourtyfour// next thing ya on the floor// with cops rushin through the door// when the judge said im facein 5 years i was shook// thats the every day life of a crook// thats when i decided to stop// a month later the charges were droped// |
that was a very cliched story. i can prolly guarantee that you haven't done any of the shit you claimin in dem verses.
anyways, not much effect in your structure, and like i said, really cliched. try rappin bout shit that you KNOW about. shit you been through, and shit that might be different from the average shmo... keep elevatin...one |
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This is your 3rd open mic today...none had links get the links for your other one that I didn't close, then PM me other links and maybe I will re-open this for you...but this is Closed.
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