yte grl vs rellik
 

im gonna start writin right now

we're both 14 but it dont matter im better than u/
u cant rap take ur dumb ass back to school/
check out this kids profile all it says is umm/
its not like he didnt want 2 fill it out he couldnt hes 2 dumb/
hes been on here 8 months and hasn't dropped 1 rhyme/
dont start now cause its my time shine/
leave the site u cant rap u dont belong/
who told u u could ur mom when u were rhymin 2 a nelly song/
u should battle people n ur own class/
cause i rhyme so fast u wont have time 2 react/
so be cautious like 50 and where a vest/
cause i'll crack ur ribs when my punches hit u n the chest/
ur a little bitch u aint worthy enough 2 battle me/
im not the best but even def kids have heard of me/

good closer, u fucked up a couple times tho "its my time shine" my time TO shine, and that other shit "who told u u could ur mom when u were rhymin to a nelly song" WHATTTTTTT???????????????????????????????????????? ???????????????????????????????????????????????? i think i know what u WANTED TO SAY

that was pretty weak...im hoping that rellik(who had my name before, i was Relik) drops something that much better or you both will be shot

shit i think that yte grl was pretty good. i give you props. fuck those other bitches. they just suck alot of cock. whatn can i say they probaly been in jail too long and turned gay

thanx joker,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,

good job yte girl i like that closer only problem i have with ur verse is u used alot of filler other than ithought u came at it pretty good.............................................. .................................................. ................................