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Katz.Frost 12-28-03 08:49 AM

Motherfucking nuisance
 
2 hot 2 handle
lyrical killer
mc nookie

FREESTYLE:tell me wot u think


Im tryna rhyme to a whack ass beat
Got the dj scared like I was clapping heat
cause my flows sick,I got no limit like Master P
Ima natural disaster see, i was born fucked up
Got dropped as a baby,now im more fucked up
Im like the LOX meets shady,but more fucked up
15 yr old thug, all drugged up, im the new shit
U old rappers is all washed, cant do shit
Ya'll useless, im Katz Frost,MO'fucing nuisance
getting on ya nerves, like dirty south music
So fuck you, if you dont like my style
we can meet up at night,fight and it might get wild
Murder you so crazy,the cops put an X on the files
Im Lenox Lewis, in abattle you, you Mike tyson
Both got hard punclines,but in a fight you be biting
Man You'd think I was moses,the way I be Smiting
Your'e first born child, Im like jhonny rotten Im vile
My rhymes is sick like bile, your rhymes suck till the end
Like 8 MILE mother fuker
:shoot:

~CeRtiFieD~ 12-28-03 10:12 AM

nice sh*t, flow were alright, an structure, were all good. But it were a lil simple, an needed tab more complexity.

Part from dat it were sum nice sh*t. peace

Damani-DaGrinch 12-28-03 12:20 PM

dat shit was pretty tight....but u need 2 work on structure and seetin ya self up 4 da next bar....
not bad though..i like the lennox lewis and mike tyson rhyme.....
peep my shit and return da favor..
-1-

Menik 12-28-03 06:04 PM

Yeah it was alright i thought....structure in this was ok, it could use some work in some spots though i think.....flow in this was ok, it could have been better....try adding some better multies to this to make it better...but keep at it.

MD_killa 12-28-03 06:14 PM

this barley made decent... you said up like 5440934 times... not creative... but it was a ok piece tho... just to just go off the head.. no thought into it... welp keep goin. get big... elevate...

Caesar... on3

Katz.Frost 12-28-03 06:27 PM

thanx 4 da feed back


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