Token Vs. Relik
2 Lines.
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Checkin in for the win.
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Checkin in because Token told me to :) I will drop by late wednesday, sorry got a lot to do.
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The only way Token ever got recognition was to play tricks on these vets dicks,
Now he has an assorment of noobs to do these favors to him, look at Tha Remix -Had to edit to get rid of the explanation, to herbish |
Beat Me? Now your going overboard with sarcasm, kid
You're like an item on ebay the way you've been for-bid lmao.. blah.. I just woke up.. But atleast I didn't no-show.. Thanks for letting me spit. |
alwitey, wets get these vwotes
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blah, everyother battles clsoed, now close this
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Sarcasm... I'd like to vote on
this battle but your link doesn't work. So I can't understand your punch. Fix your link so I can compare punches. |
I don't think there was suppose to be a link in there
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Tha Remix underlined wasn't a link?
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it was supposed to show who token was in a convo i had (Tha Remix), fuck it im not dealing with it. this is says it good enough.
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if nobody knows what your
personal means its gonna hurt you. Oh well... tough battle Positives Sarcasm - used a personal. Personals win battles. They usually hurt more than anything. Token - showed potential with wordplay. Wordplay can, if used effectively boost a verse astronomically. Negatives Sarcasm - dont exactly know what ur personal meant but still carried some punch. Token - u didnt attack your opponent specifically. I could've been in this battle and you coulda used that punch. It wouldn't make any difference. In a 2 line battle you HAVE to attack your opponent. This lost it for you. Now I hope that's fair. That's the best breakdown you're ever gonna see for a 2 bar battle. vote - sarcasm |
^ Actually it's a 1 bar battles.. 2 lines.. :o
But mine was personal.. Note: Sarcasm.. 1-0 |
lol appreciate the 4 paragraph breakdown- it is the best we'll get, now uppin for more, votes
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that doesn't make it a personal.
A personal disses a specific trait about your opponent or what they did. Just because you dissed doesnt make it a personal. and a breakdown consists of both verses a bar from each thus = 2 bar battle with 1 bar verses. |
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