168 vs madman-doubless
 

Aight yall here's the rules:

10-15 lines
No crew or hate votes (try to keep shit fair)
I'll spit first, then 168 will
No dickrydin'
5 votes to win

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peace

Check it:

Yo 618, I got ya scared an' callin 9-1-1/
But by the time ya dial the number, ya life will be done/
The cops wil find ya, bloody will piss coverin' ya pants/
Somebody help this merked bitch, cal them an ambulance/
I don't know ya gender but if ya avatar is female/
And if you a guy, you must be gettin' rammed by another guy's rail/
I'll leave you lookin' both ways, more confused than Elmer Fudd/
Leave you mutterin "Rascally rabbit" while you drownin' in a pool of ya blood/
618 what was the logic behind ya name, did you go insane?/
My lyrics will leave defection's up in ya membrane/
Leave you in mental institution, straight up insane/
Before I pull out a nine and blow out ya brain/
If you wanna bring beef, i'll serve ya steak/
Fore' I lay you down in a coffin, ya challenge was I big mistake/

yo
check it this homo is dumbest its 168
bictch its only three numbers still can't get it st8

im open a new thread in textual territory and call the grave
your the newst and only member but still you aint brave

this dawg talkin about fag jokes you blow thats why 1-5
rappin about cops,dude this aint poetry scriptures get a life

knives and blades hiddin cuz ten lines is enough for this man
the way you rap, the only think you shpuld gain is a band

check it im tie a new "L" and make it stick to your name
its funny cuz in the alphabet the L also sticks to the M i won this game...


peace

dire battle really was...............i cant really point out any good sh*t part from 168's last line, that were still pretty lame..........
the structure from both needed alot of polish an the flow, were 'just not there'. I gotta vote 168, having the lil flow that were in it an the punches were alot better...........

return the vote............
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...57&pagenumber=2

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plz vote

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don't sleep on this

madman--
got a lot of nice punches in there. i especially liked the 911 punch...and the steak punch, all pretty good. a pretty good verse.

168--
nice line about it not being 618, pretty clever. i gotta say, overall, both were pretty weak, but i gotta say 168 couldnt pull it out.

vote - madman

please, return the favor, end my battles so i can get on with it--

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101943

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101934

opener-168...madman...urs was wack as fuck
flow-168
punches-madman
personals-168
multis-none
metas-168
overall-168

Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote.
-Cprogress

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vote this you'll

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last upin
can votes be dropped in here

peace

metas - 168 flow -168 personals - 168 punches 168
it flowed aight so thats good,had some ok metas for a newb,
punches really need to be worked on
u both need to elevate casue that was weak ( no hate)

mad man is dq'd for being currently in 4 active battles. sorry but rules are rules. -feeble.The text that you have entered is too short. Please lengten it to at least 100 characters long.


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