CarsonJet -v- Canuck
 

10 lines
normal rules
blind spits
1 hour max after both check in......

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Let's take a break from all this fake shit, 'Jet//
cuz ya make-shift lyrics is what make's ya regret//
to attempt to subject yaself to a text-to-text contest//
and this X-2 is best to check-out, cuz he don't want-this//
cuz i'm flawless, like Ken* when I do a Haa-Doo-Kin//
an American feel'n this pen, while I grin as I'm Nuke'n//
I spit fire and choke these newbies, call me an arson vet//
Ya'perspire while I be smoke'n doobies, and bomb'n on Carsen Jet//
I'll put the flames out, cuz ya bitter ya gonna see me win this//
Instead of Call'n Names Out, re-consider before you begin this//


* = Street Fighter (Duh)

^ that was 15 minutes ^

I'm fucking SO Awsome

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^u shoulda taken advantage of ur time^^

forget a computer..I could take a type-writer an merk this loser-
jus another anal intruder^all the myth's point right at vancouver
Comparin talent like Jet to a scooter or Mcdonalds to hooters...
get the equation canuck?...if u were a number I'd be ur re-rooter
enough wit dis skin flut'in fanatic it's like nuck's facin cacuis clay-
whatchin him elevate? please i rather veiw oprahs skin expholiate
for real i'm startin to feel nukin futs way i'm rippin dis fukin nuck-
wit words in trucks-i load to many verbs for u to drop n suck-
It's proof in his sig...Only dopes in canada can win at this-
Jet spills?still kill's this kid what u expect-he dreams bout olsen twins(sig)

i think they were both good but Jet had better flow and punches,and vocab other than that i thought it was pretty even
good battle.

vote-Jet


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Canuck
Let's take a break from all this fake shit, 'Jet//
cuz ya make-shift lyrics is what make's ya regret//
7/10

to attempt to subject yaself to a text-to-text contest//
and this X-2 is best to check-out, cuz he don't want-this//
7/10

cuz i'm flawless, like Ken* when I do a Haa-Doo-Kin//
an American feel'n this pen, while I grin as I'm Nuke'n//
5/10

I spit fire and choke these newbies, call me an arson vet//
Ya'perspire while I be smoke'n doobies, and bomb'n on Carsen Jet//
6/10

I'll put the flames out, cuz ya bitter ya gonna see me win this//
Instead of Call'n Names Out, re-consider before you begin this//
6.5/10

overall 31.5/50


Carsonjetx2
forget a computer..I could take a type-writer an merk this loser-
jus another anal intruder^all the myth's point right at vancouver
7/10

Comparin talent like Jet to a scooter or Mcdonalds to hooters...
get the equation canuck?...if u were a number I'd be ur re-rooter
7/10

enough wit dis skin flut'in fanatic it's like nuck's facin cacuis clay-
whatchin him elevate? please i rather veiw oprahs skin expholiate
8/10

for real i'm startin to feel nukin futs way i'm rippin dis fukin nuck-
wit words in trucks-i load to many verbs for u to drop n suck-
6/10

It's proof in his sig...Only dopes in canada can win at this-
Jet spills?still kill's this kid what u expect-he dreams bout olsen twins(sig)
6/10


overall- 33/50

my vote carsonjetx2

plz drop an honest vote on this battle

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101874

Let's take a break from all this fake shit, 'Jet//
cuz ya make-shift lyrics is what make's ya regret//
pretty nice opener...3.5/5

to attempt to subject yaself to a text-to-text contest//
and this X-2 is best to check-out, cuz he don't want-this//
i think the opener was better 3/5

cuz i'm flawless, like Ken* when I do a Haa-Doo-Kin//
an American feel'n this pen, while I grin as I'm Nuke'n//
meh...sounds like a filler to me...jsut my opinion 2.5/5

I spit fire and choke these newbies, call me an arson vet//
Ya'perspire while I be smoke'n doobies, and bomb'n on Carsen Jet//
hehe, good use of words 3/5

I'll put the flames out, cuz ya bitter ya gonna see me win this//
Instead of Call'n Names Out, re-consider before you begin this//
Ur best line to me....4/5

Overall: 16/25

forget a computer..I could take a type-writer an merk this loser-
jus another anal intruder^all the myth's point right at vancouver
Ill opener...4.5/5

Comparin talent like Jet to a scooter or Mcdonalds to hooters...
get the equation canuck?...if u were a number I'd be ur re-rooter
styll goin strong....4/5

enough wit dis skin flut'in fanatic it's like nuck's facin cacuis clay-
whatchin him elevate? please i rather veiw oprahs skin expholiate
not as strong as your first two...3/5

for real i'm startin to feel nukin futs way i'm rippin dis fukin nuck-
wit words in trucks-i load to many verbs for u to drop n suck-
meh... 3/5

It's proof in his sig...Only dopes in canada can win at this-
Jet spills?still kill's this kid what u expect-he dreams bout olsen twins(sig)
played out punch...weak finisher 2.5/5

Overall: 17.5/25

Vote- Carson


Drop sum honest votes on the battles in my sig plz. thx.

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Opener: carson
Punches: Carson
Personals: tie...
Structure: carson..Canuck ur lines r 2 short kid
Flow: Can
Vocab: Can
Closer: Carson

This battle was closer then my shit appears but carson took it by a small margin in most cata's~

<center>Breakdown</center>
<center>punches- car
flow- can
personals- car
structure- car
vocab- can
opener- car
closer- car
creativity- can
complexity- car
overall- car

good battle...

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