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Rock1n' Flames vs madman-doubless
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aight checkin in, i got 15 mins now, and after i spit, u have 10-15 mins to spit, if not, the battle is off...so CHECKIN IN''!!
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Are you ok?.. is wat everyone is now askin this guy for acceptin the challenge....
You against me is like fat people on tight ropes you just dont manage to balance... You wont be able to spit when i leave ya tunge in ya throat damaged and slanted... I'll savagely hand this but this kids records himself suckin dick like pamala anderson... SWITCH IT... Dawg like a Bum Wit a Revolver i'll..... sloppily snub you................... And i dont have to type stretched lines to make a mockery of you.... You tryin to surf down pyramids..... dont even tri, dude................... It's like ya wack ass is from Dirt City cause i hate everything by you....... Like a QB playin point guard... dawg youre WAY outta position.......... Quit twitchin... i'll leave ya face in everybodies mailbox missin........... I'll beat your wack ass into submission, you gettin' a victory !? that shit's comedy............... Your wins don't Add Up when ya lines are Infinitely Stretched like Geometry .............. |
Check it:
Rock1n' Flames, you belong inside a freakshow/ Just for you to know ya lost this battle, I'll put it in slow mo/ My lyrical metaphor send you on an acid trip without the acid/ Ya brain's more fried than a guy with a sparkler in Lake Placid/ Bitch you 13 an' you still learnin' multiplication/ The only thing way you get ahead in life is if you blow the entire nation/ You takin' hard shit, while you rip easier than tissue paper/ Ya only skill is bein' an attempted kid raper/ I'll leave you with bruises an' scarres that'll never heal/ Leave ya skin so thin, that it'll come off with a single peel/ Ya seem to be passin out and ya see rainbows in ya head/ But after I'm done with ya, the only coler ya see will be red/ Like Lucky Charms, I'm magically delicious in every way/ The only way ya'll pick up wins is if ya battle grandpas on Park Avenue Way/ |
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easy to decide this....rockin takes it, simply for the fact taht madman had some really gay-ass supposed to be punchlines...wasn't impressed with you at all....vote rockin
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flames you got this.. madman had some whack ass punches that were really aimless.. i laughed at some of your punches too.. you had better structures.. also.. madman.. elevate dude then come back
vote = flames http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101949 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102049 |
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I say madman took this one, he didnt need to change the style up half way through cause he cant write longer lines, flames closer was fucken gayed out, I know what he was trying to do but he just slopped it together though it honestly doesnt make sense, i really hate it when people rhyme the same word at the end of a sentence twice, "nigga ill kill you, then ill murder you" LAMEEEEEEEEE LACK OF CREATIVITY MADMAN TOOK IT though ive seen him write better shit than that verse up theres punch lines---------------------------------------------------------------------
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Flames Took this But it was A Good Battle
Open = Flames Flow = tie Structure = Tie Pucnhes = flames Personals = none really Wordplay = Tie Close = Flames Vote = Flames Yo Repay Favour i need votes im getting slept on peace http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...166#post1030166 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...176#post1030176 |
aight, rock1n came tough, got some good shit goin on, but madman came back and replied with some serious shit. ther was more ther, better punches. i was really feelin madman.
vote: madman. please return the favor...help me close up so i can battle more. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102139 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101943 |
mad man is dq'd for being currently in 4 active battles. sorry but rules are rules. -feeble.The text that you have entered is too short. Please lengten it to at least 100 characters long.
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