Danksta vs Deela03
 

5-10 bars
5 votes wins
3 for tko
good luck
due tuesday Midnight

I'll drop

See static when the GAME-STARTS,I 'Burn love' like 'Flamed-HEarts' and 'i'll GLADLY hand you an 'L' with a yawn' like smokin in GRAVE-YARDS//Leave your tongue-split-for-sure when my cum-hits-your-shirt your a 'Hostage spilling guts' You cant "Stomach-TORTURE"//Dont step-to-this-demon i leave you wretched-and-screamin casue like 'gun down thieves' this Hex'd Hoe's-left-bleedin

Somethin short for a newb...

let me fix it up so u guys get it

You'll see static when the GAME-STARTS,I 'Burn love' like 'Flamed-HEarts' and 'i'll GLADLY hand you an 'L' with a yawn' like smokin in GRAVE-YARDS//

Leave your tongue-split-for-sure when my cum-hits-your-shirt your a 'Hostage spilling guts' You cant "Stomach-TORTURE"//

Dont step-to-this-demon i leave you wretched-and-screamin casue like 'gun down thieves' this Hex'd Hoe's-left-bleedin

Ok all better...hurry and drop

Ur an ugly "ass clown", even your *psychiatrist* requests u to lay "face down", Change ya *religion* cover your face in a "lace gown"//1

I "blast herbs" leave ya seeing *stars* like i was *texting* "passwords" haven u *smashed* like shooting "glass birds", with these "mass verbs", Cuz u spit *fecel* little "ass turds"//2

U only spit *sick* choken on "erect dicks", even then ya *salivas* not getting "Direct Hits", The only *hoe on RB* to "Reject Tits", Cuz He "Expects Sticks", To "Connect Licks"//3
(sticks = dicks)

This *Bitch*is in *Mods Cross Hairs* like he's "Blowing Christ*, Leave u like a *tampon* ya "Flowings Sliced", Have u *Laying Frozen* Like i was "Growing Ice"//4

Gotta *rainbow tatty* around ya "asshole", *directing traffic* in a "mass pole", getting *wheel barrels* at a "fast stroll", everyones *smoking this fag* like a "Last Bowl"//5

Your Skills *are no where to be found* like "Iraqs Weapons", Cuz u "Wack Reppin", not going *forward* ya
"back stepping", only thing u good at is "ass Crack Preppin"//6

And I Ripped u for the hell of it, Cuz ur *done* like "pornstars who are celibate", if u put *glade in ya ass* ya *fecel would still stink*, ~suck your own cock~ guess your ALWAYS "smellin shit"//7

itez im new here this is my first battle if you dont get the stuff im saying in my verse i guess dont bother voting cuz then itll be an unfair turnout, if you need explanations for my wordplay feel free to ask nice battle let the voting commence...

My vote definitely goes to deela

Punches- Deela she set em up and knocked em down sometimes twicece

Flow Deela- her structure was tighter

Multis Deela- again she fit more in her flow

Vocab- Deela

Vote Deela

Never go easy on a newbie :)

rofl....i slept on this hoe..................................shit......... .................................................. .................................

jUST PUTTIN MY VOTE IN FOR REASONS STATED ABOVE............................................. .................................................. ............................

Oh and deela............................................. .................................................. You didnt use my name once in your verse.......

why does it matter if i used your name or not its a battle it was aimed at u i dont need to flash your name around my verse

Its called personals you dumb whore..........how do i know it was 'aimed' toward me if i dont see my name or u dissing me????Stupid newbies.....Go die

k theres a difference between personals and punches
Personals: About the person hence your 14 i couldve dissed you about your age your from newyork i couldve dissed you about that but seeings as how im new hear and wouldnt know enough shit about anyone to throw personal punches i chose not to throw personal punches until im more established at the site

Regular punches: what i used a punch but not about the persons personality stuff you chose to say but dont actually know if its true, hence bar 6
Your Skills *are no where to be found* like "Iraqs Weapons", Cuz u "Wack Reppin", not going *forward* ya
"back stepping", only thing u good at is "ass Crack Preppin"//6

Iraqs weapons have so far been impossible to find so i said your skills were impossible to find not knowing if u had skills never reading one of your battles before.

Anyhow im not gonna sit here schooling you about the difference between Personal Punches and Regular Punches saying im the fucken newbie well if you want to get schooled again since you "didnt try" set it up after this and if youd like ill mention your name in that spit.

1 more thing why the hell u frettin sayen i didnt put your name in my verse i dont see my name in ya verse wanna know why cuz U DONT HAVE TO PUT THE PERSONS NAME IN THE VERSE

ive already read like 100 battles on here and the people arent stating there opponents names.

stop whinen cuz im leading this in votes and let the battle commence and the voters vote ights

UPPEN!
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1-0 Deela
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1-0 Deela
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1-0 Deela
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You're DQed. Every post after both verses are in is considered an upp. If you complain in IR you're banned. - Token