1st to wreck vs Criticize22!!!!!
 

10-20 bars
no d/r, crew, hate, or bullshit votes
ill spit first

deadline is umm whenever u get it in!

checkin in............................................BIT. .......CHAAAAAAAAA................................

You lack the flow, so I altered your menstrual just to watch this pussy bleed slow//
His hardness mushy when he blows, your face cavities shines RED when it glows//
But when things get 'technical' you end up like 'Shaq', cuz you just can't 'connect' when given 'free throws'//
Viewing your spits shows that nuthin you advertise is authentic, wut are you of Wal-mart quality//
Unravel your thread just to prove your synthetic I might as well have a shadow spawl wit me//
You attempt to rip me so you grabs a 'jig-saw', bitch you can’t ‘figure’ me out, you’ll just be 'puzzled' from my ‘complexity’//
Remove the anthrax from my blood just to gain a sicker recipe//
You think you bleed electricity but I’ll cut off your circulation when I flip the switch//
Remove the stitch exposing your open flesh to itch, dismember your body parts and watch them twitch//
Your elevation begins to plummet attempting to swallow my ‘sickness’ ‘upsetting’ your ‘stomach’//
You spit nothing but shit, so I soak them in my ‘liquids’ just to make them ‘run quick’//
Now its time to end this quick so Imma cum at you hard till you quit//
Force the response outta you, wut can I say I love to watch a pussy spit//
Allowing my hardness to continue to grow//
Unlike theses no show 'bitches i'm still gonna 'flow'//

man that wuz ok i guess

u gunna drop ?!

I don't think you wrote that, but whatever, man

20 bars and you ain't even scratch the surface, i brush you off
with a gun in your face, i'm like Jesse James, you hush, you soft
don't even think your rhymes are tight. well you don't on the net..
but at home you get excited. you just wanna sound like you a vet
but you aint that good. That's the best that you'll get and u kno it
I been flowin, I been better than you since a long time ago, shit..
U say you a wrigga, but come around my fuckin hood and say that
You aint shit, you like a god damn sega; no 1 wants to play that
In that sense I could be an xbox, gamecube, ps2; say i'm the best
from Texas? U should be accustomed to da heat i put to ya chest
what are you, a fuckin kamakazi? dude, you settin up your death
hang the game up b4 it hangs you. Or else i'll take ur last breath
your structure's more fucked than twin towers after 9-11, just bad
to add, your flow not cuttin it like a butter knife to steak, you sad
your punches don't land. i'll say it on da highest level you've been to;
i'm rubber, you glue. whatever you say bounces off me, back to U!
your critilizations are nothin, i wouldn't slow down and worry for $
I'm a Big Mac, you couldn't even buy yourself a smal McFlurry, no $
you worthless like rap styles from the 70's nobody feelin you at all
maybe your mom or dad, or your man, cuz your kneelin to his balls
this dude is not anybody to get worked up on, he's only a herb
however many verbs you use, you still gettin kicked to the curb

why dont u think i wrote that?

i seen ur other shit.........

well i'm uppin............................................. .............................................

nice flow i enjoyed it and it made me laugh

that shit wasnt good and all my other shit didnt like SUCK but it wasnt kick ass!!!

^ yea, then u can also see why he got the win...

their was no strong punches in each of ya verses, ...not even close to interesting, ya both came terribly weak, i forgive u both tho, don't worry...lol..anyways, 1st to wreck had a good structure, flow and creativity and vocab which got him this win, take the quotes out ya shiit an you'll be fin cri..

vote --- 1st

vote on this in return, the both of you.

cannabarz vs flesh-n-bone

Weak Battle!!

1st to wreck , what happend hommie i expected a whole lot more from you.. those lines where you where writing about "sega, ps2, camecub and all was hella weak and played, i just wasnt feeling your verse dawg, but you structure was much better than Criticize22 :)... i think that you might of underestamated Criticize22. Im Kind of Dissapointed because i thought that you would of come better than you did....

Criticize22, now i dont know i you really wrote that so that is why i am not taking 1st to wreck word for it cause he thinks you did (as posted above) untill there is proof my vote goes to Criticize22, you had harder landing punches and personal including some good metas but your structure sucked ass. This battle turned out to be the Whole opposite then what i Expected..

No hate just a vote. props to both

Peace