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Spiral G 12-30-03 02:18 AM

................Lyrics Post G..................
 
Yo,

Man this life is soo fucking wrong, i dont think this is where i belong, rapping and making lyrics makes me feel better, than writing a stupid love letter, all this time wasted , hate realted and debated , all gone all times is flowing, ij sut feel like throwing , some spit game , and earn my self a new fame , a new change , so i can get on the range , of ppl batteling and killing , im there and i am willing , change is good , puts u in a good mood, everyone who like writing lyrics write one , and post one, under mine , so you can give me a sign , of you for me to know im not the only one on the earth like this , it goes fast and its a bliss, i like ppl who are listening , and i know theyre like me and will be glistening , and like some 24 inch rims spinning , and for once we all will be winning Screw all of it now im in it and its rap till my death , and i know i got good health , so i can put it up more , and i will till my hands are sore, this is what i can type post after if you want if you dont i understand no hate its all fate , Late

Menik 12-30-03 02:34 AM

You need to leave 3 links or 3 names of people you left feedback to or this will get closed, Thanks.

Antonio Banderas 12-30-03 04:24 PM

^^^Ur material is nice....But, ur stuff is to cluttered up. U need to seperate ur work. Try to go line for line and seperate some spaces..................

~CeRtiFieD~ 12-30-03 04:32 PM

ure complexity needs sorting out, as an said its a lil clutered....
but sum nice stuff keep it up...


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