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Joker VS Born To Kill
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yo joker man soz for freeposting but plz hit this EDITED as i took the time.thx and soz again............................................. .....pz
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Ya might be a joker, a midnight smoker, but one thing ya ain't...is good.
With bells on ya Lugz, and a dirt weed buzz, ya embarrasin this hood. I mean look at ya avy, could you strike a more submissive pose? You look like ya wanna get fucked, seriously, ya half way outta ya clothes! I see those who oppose get crushed like ants, man...since ya ain't been beat... But I'm here ta disclose I'm a rope like Batman and leave ya deck incomplete. Capture tha Joker, then toss him aside, cuz alone he's useless... Nothing seems to compliment this guy, except his own excuses. Ya subpar, gotcha 1st loss, now you truely do rank below #2, son... So the bullethole in ya name is fitting, cuz I've just made a hole in one. |
.:K:.
Isn't allowed to vote on this battle since he decided to freepost in here! Seriously... Stop that shit. If K votes, I'm reporting it as riding. I hate bullshit freeposting to garner votes! IT'S AGAINST THE RULES!!! Peace |
Ur acient flows are no match fo me the barely provided wins in the past
Ya sig is irrelevant cause u got a 100 percent chance that I’ll merk ur ass Nigga u need to retire ur like 40 years old and u still don’t get respect Old ass nigga…Ya rhymes was neva hard like ya viagra had no effect Nigga fuckin wit me you’ll have ur last seizure that will end ur life Ur livin a miserable life 35 years past and ur still a virgin wit no wife Ya state nickname is ur biography cause ur very lonely and ya die’n’slow How da fuck are u on this site for 7 months and still don’t got no flow Ur not no vet just anotha newbie wit a lop-sided record tryin blow yaself up discrace 2 da game wit no experience when u been in it since snoop was a pup |
Open = Joker defenitly
Ur acient flows are no match fo me the barely provided wins in the past Ya sig is irrelevant cause u got a 100 percent chance that I’ll merk ur ass siknesss Flow & Structure = joker Punches = Joker Wordplay = Tie Closer = Joker Ur not no vet just anotha newbie wit a lop-sided record tryin blow yaself up discrace 2 da game wit no experience when u been in it since snoop was a pup haha sik Vote = joker Godd Battle REPAY FAVOUR I SPENT LIKE 7 Minutes breakin this down yo http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...166#post1030166 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...176#post1030176 |
y'knoq...born came strong on this one, had a lot of good punches, but joker came back hard. the 100% merk line was good, and the age jokes were decent...i got to say:
vote: joker please return the favor: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101943 |
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OPener: BtK I though Jokers was mad played
Closer: tie Both were kinda played Flow: tie Both were good reads Personals: BtK All Joker talked bout was your age and shit. BtK had some good smart personals Punches:BtK Good metas and shit. Koker had punches but few hit Win:BtK |
this battle is definately going to joker. his opener was what made him win it too. BTK, your closer was tight too. but joker came harder and that is what got him my vote.
vote - joker when i get a battle, ill edit a link in here and u can vote for me |
opener: joker i like th way he dissed on his sig that says the Merk %
flow:tie both had a decent flow going Punhes: B2K i think that b2k's punches landed harder that J's did Personals: both had good ones but b2k had more. and they where more consistent vocab:neither really metas: Tie both had some but not to good Finisher: b2k both had good finishers the snoop part in jokers was nice, not played but kind of obviouse..b2k's finisher was played. Overall: B2k i just felt that he had a better overall verse.. No Hate Just a vote.. Props to both Peace |
i really liked the overall feel of b2k's verse better ........i'll break it down in one of the many forms i use......comparitive punches........
I mean look at ya avy, could you strike a more submissive pose? You look like ya wanna get fucked, seriously, ya half way outta ya clothes! Ya state nickname is ur biography cause ur very lonely and ya die’n’slow How da fuck are u on this site for 7 months and still don’t got no flow those were the best punches from both sides in my opinion.....the play of your avy was mad hilairous and intelligent so i'm giving this to B2k...also you vocab at the end of your lines was really simplisitic......his wasn't much better but the punches took you.....vote b2k |
B2K'S VERSE
Ya might be a joker, a midnight smoker, but one thing ya ain't...is good. With bells on ya Lugz, and a dirt weed buzz, ya embarrasin this hood. .first line was decent.....second was pretty much filler.......6/10 I mean look at ya avy, could you strike a more submissive pose? You look like ya wanna get fucked, seriously, ya half way outta ya clothes! nice punch/personal....creative.......9/10 I see those who oppose get crushed like ants, man...since ya ain't been beat... But I'm here ta disclose I'm a rope like Batman and leave ya deck incomplete. wasnt really feeling the first line....but second one was nice....7/10 Capture tha Joker, then toss him aside, cuz alone he's useless... Nothing seems to compliment this guy, except his own excuses. this was a nice bar here.......9/10 Ya subpar, gotcha 1st loss, now you truely do rank below #2, son... So the bullethole in ya name is fitting, cuz I've just made a hole in one. not the greatest closer but gets the job done...7/10 38/50=76% Jokers verse Ur acient flows are no match fo me the barely provided wins in the past Ya sig is irrelevant cause u got a 100 percent chance that I’ll merk ur ass nice opener i was feelin the personal here.....9/10 Nigga u need to retire ur like 40 years old and u still don’t get respect Old ass nigga…Ya rhymes was neva hard like ya viagra had no effect not a great bar here..it was so so.......6/10 Nigga fuckin wit me you’ll have ur last seizure that will end ur life Ur livin a miserable life 35 years past and ur still a virgin wit no wife lmao........good punch/personal although the age jokes are played it still had a good effect......8/10 Ya state nickname is ur biography cause ur very lonely and ya die’n’slow How da fuck are u on this site for 7 months and still don’t got no flow nice bar........decent personal.......8/10 Ur not no vet just anotha newbie wit a lop-sided record tryin blow yaself up discrace 2 da game wit no experience when u been in it since snoop was a pup nice closer here...9/10 40/50=80% close battle but joker wins 40-38........good battle both of u |
haha weird
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