What most yall bitches are
 

talk the shit up thinkin they got some kinda opinion that matters
the only way that shit could have meaning is if u Marshall Mathers
talkin about fightin and killin thats shit yall niggaz dont know
real gangstas dont fuck around on computers yo
but go ahead and use phrases from your favorite cds
listenin to G-unit prayin to the lord "make me a gangsta please"
soldiers wannaBees, back in the school yard got teased
chaffed and laughed at til you cried with your face in your knees
sorry to reveal all these startling facts about homies
all yall niggaz is just puttin on an act you dont know me

3 people : SeanJohn, WestSideConnection, TheUnderrated

yo man.... Ya got descent flow....

U need to add some vocabulary and some multies to ur writings......

Alright I Guess, When I Was Gettin Into It, It Ended...It Was Very True and I Think The Flow Was A LITTLE off but just by a bit...and Just advice Dont Rhyme With "Yo" as the Last word...It lacks Creativeness

No Hate... 6/10 mics

-Uno

Get 3 different people you left feedback to...because 2 of the 3 dont exist on the site....this is closed, PM me links and maybe i'll re-open this for you.